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Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy venture into the Everfree forest to find the source of the smoke visible above the treeline. Where is it coming from, who started it, and where's Applejack? Quick, short story featuring an old villian.

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:pinkiehappy:Please write more for this story. It would be interesting to read about Trixie's time spent rebuilding Zecora's hut and all that happens while she is doing it, like the emotional stuff she goes through and the lessons she learns. Pinkie could be the only one who treats her nicely at first and tries to befriend her because she wants to make friends with everypony. It could be kind of like the movie 'Cars' where he has to fix the road in the town and he learns about friendship and caring about others.:trixieshiftright:

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Really, you liked it that much? I didn't think people would, but, come to think of it, I had a little more going on in my head before I realized that I was running out of time (for the contest; I needed to get it in by the deadline). If you anybody wants it, I may just come back and add a few chapters; keep an eye on it!

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