An series of TwiDash drabbles that follow the two mares through their relationship: The good times, the bad times and all the spaces in between.
Inconsistent updating schedule.
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Far from my best work, I know, but... I don't know, I just wanted to write some TwiDash.
Love the reference to the famous song. I LOVE (I Would Walk) 500 Miles by The Proclaimers. One of my favorite songs; I heard it first back in high school. Was hooked ever since. Eh-hem, anyway, this was rather short, but still cute and to the point. I love Twilight x Rainbow, and you did a good job on a quickie. Nice work.
short, but very good
also, cant stop listening this:
Short and adorable, I'm so in need some DashXTwi after the last episodes. My friends were so crazy about this song a few weeks ago, thanks for reminding me about it, it's also a cool thing. ;)
But would she walk five hundred more?
She walked 1000 miles to fall down at her door
wow, you surprised me with this. I saw that it was only 1000 words and I though "Wow, another terrible 1000 word fic gets featured *sigh*" But this was stellar. It was actually well written *gasp*
You get a thumbs up *It's not the same! D:*
and a track. Woot!
Very, very good for such a short story. Your development was spot on, and I could picture the characters saying every word. Great job. I like your writing style.
OH GOD THAT SONG
I don't fully remember why but that song became an incredibly annoying craze here a few years back. It got played so much... I was hoping I'd seen the last of it ages ago.
The story was lovely though, except that I'm not sure how RD's dad knew RD was his daughter. Butother than that, an enjoyable read
Short and not much of a point, but I still liked it, You manged to keep dash as her insecure self and that is something a lot of ponies fail to do.
I love that freaking song. I hear every morning on my Ipod.
Also, very good story.
There needs to be more
this isn't something that would be just one chapter
with the way you ended it, it sounds like you actually want to continue it. So please do
It's always awesome to see Dash be insecure about something and/or have an awkward time trying to explain something while staying in character.
That was a sweet scene.
That is all.
Dat ending. Lovable.
Not much point, but still serves a purpose? Check.
5 stars good sir.
"To fall down at your door."? Twidash my fav ship.
I'd walk a thousand MILES
All very good, yes, two TwiDash stories featured today....
> “Look, Twi... How happy are your parent
But you forgot an 's' right there. Now I am legally obligated to remove any happy emotions experienced upon reading this, and withdraw my good words. I am truly sorry but that's just how it works.
If I could, then I would
I'll go wherever you will go
And can you feel, the love tonight!
And she will be loved
Yeah she will be lo-o-o-oved!
All three songs went through my head (Thank you 4 chord song) while reading this. Good on you sir.
"I would write five hundred words, and I would write five hundred more..."
Nice to see people not only understanding but enjoying the reference. One of the catchiest songs ever.
... Alright, I'll let you guys/gals decide....
Should I continue this or not
I'm actually leaning towards continuing it, but it's up to y'all to decide
If you've got a plot (Not THAT kind, get yer minds out of the gutter) in mind, do, please, continue.
Yes, continue. It was a great story. Real sweet
To quote Rarity:
"You must. You must! YOU MUST!"
sure, why not.
>>236384236384 Yes. Now that that exchange has happened, now would be the time for one of them to go missing.
>>236384236384 Definately!! It's good where it is making it longer would make it 20% (quite possibly in ten seconds flat)
Well, the crowd has spoken... Looks like this tale is far from over. Good thing I've already got a solid plan about where to go with this.
Be on the look-out for continuation.
and looking forward for the continueation
that is all
Huzzah! A cute TwiDash story is something I always want to read.
Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.
Must fight it!!! must.....fight.....it! Cant fight it D'AWWWWWW!
And TwiDash never ceases to be great
Looking forward to what you have for this story.
A good quick read.
So... I've decided to turn this into a kind of collection of mostly-unrelated TwiDash one-shots (with maybe a few multi-parters thrown in for good measure). They'll range from comedic to dreary and everything in between. I know it's not exactly the most original idea ever, but I'll still try my best to make it a fun ride.
TwiDash one-shots? Please. I like finding myself drowsed in d'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw.
99 red balloons, floating the summer sky. Panic bells, it's red alert...
Edit: "floating IN the summer sky" dammit...
This was truly heartwarming and I eagerly await the next installment
this was funny
I saw a few grammar mistakes and can't actually see how the two chapters go together
but it was still good and I'll continue tracking
She was singing Undone (The Sweater Song). I knew I recognized it.
Ding! Ding! Ding!
You win a cookie.
I really loved this, especially the bill comparisons. It was cute and creative, and it easily earned a spot on my favorites list.
That was... interesting...
Drunk Twilight is best Twilight.
I don't know why, but I'm really feeling this story right now.
Yes, that chapter is supposed to be 262 words long... Twilight's got some preparations to do
Also, this is my first time writing in first-person as well as stream-of-conscious, so... Yeah, it probably sucks
I want the Princesses reply!
>>240933240933 this does not suck. Infact it gives the story depth and I can't wait to see how this will turn out
>>241088241088 I also want to see it!
The story is good! A TwiDash story with a lot of development of their relationship? Its rare and I am liking it.
I also agree with Anonymo, Celestia's replies would be quite interesting.
Dear Twilight Sparkle,
You fillyfooling heathen. I hear-by expel you from Canterlot Magic Academy. Never write to this address again
Nah, I may get around to adding in the replies from Celestia eventually, but that all depends on how many of these "letters" I add in
>>241277241277 you almost got me there
Rofl, I loled.
Wow... you've pretty much summed up the process of loving someone/pony. Do I love her/him? Should I love her/him? Is that love returned? Why might I love her/him? Why would she/he love me?
Those questions run through my mind every time I see a potential person to be with my hopeless romantic being.
I actualy love stream of concious writing, for me it makes stories more realistic as if I'm there when it happens. Love this story, keep up the good work.
Very well written, and I like this pairing. So far, so good. Keep up the good work.
Great for a short chapter. Nice work.
"I guess “nice” would be the proper verb."
great story cant wait for the next chapter
Keep up the good work, I'm really liking this.
I. want. next. part. now. AI SED NAU!
First sentence has an extra "that".
And Rainbow's head-government is hilarious
Interesting fact: Valentine's Day is based on a Roman holiday known as the Feast of Lupercal, which is held February 15th (not 14th). It celebrates Pan, God of Fertility. He takes the form of a faun (half man, half goat). On this day, infertile women are fit with goat skins, in hopes that Pan will bless them with fertility. The first act of William Shakespeare's play "Julius Caesar" takes during this festival, and Caesar hopes that his wife will be hit with the skin to make her fertile.
I'd go with just 'term' or 'word'.
Sorry this took so long. This whole past week has just been filled with papers and tests.
Anyway, I decided to go for something more serious here. Hopefully it isn't too bad.
The statistics... yeah, that sounds like something Twi would do.
A good and serious update!
That song is fitting for this chapter
you should have it at the beginning of it not the end
just so everypony that reads this will be crying by the end comes around
Okay, so I'll start by doing that annoying thing so many of us do: I'm not really a TwiDasher, at all. I say that not to slam TwiDash (all ships are Best Ship!) but to offer some background. I'm not super keen on TwiDash, but I am REALLY, really enjoying this story. (Whereas I'll read just about any scrap of RainbowPie I can get my hands on ... so the fact that a TwiDash story has made it onto my tracks, I figure, really means something.)
I love the layers here, in both the story-telling and the characters. Both Rainbow and Twilight feel so rich and so real, yet still very themselves. I love how things go from awkward to funny to sweet to sad, then back 'round again. I totally loved Rainbow's internal tricameral legislature comprised of the houses of coolness, awesomeness, and radicalness. And then I felt that ache in my chest reading your most recent chapter, at Twilight's anxieties and fears. In particular, this was highly poetic and, I think, very moving imagery:
"It is a feathery word
It is crushing my diaphragm."
Thank you for writing this and sharing it. I look forward to future chapters.
I finally got around to reading this, after following it for a bit... and I like it.
now this is a nice TwiDash fic, no out of character moments, no rushing, and no obvious breaking of canon.
tracked, hoping for more to come
This is just Twilight shipfic night for me, isn't it? Second one I've found tonight that grabbed my interest, and I have a third open while I contemplate actually reading it.
I actually love the format here. Like an episodic look into the relationship. Brilliant.
What is this "love" you speak of? Is it something you eat?
"I'd never stop looking for you, Rainbow."
That is just so sweet, I need to go brush my teeth.
Why is drunk Twi so extra adorkable to imagine? >w< *giggles*
FINALLY FOUND THIS! arg you changed the name and I could not find it anymore you sir are a pain in the flank!
@.@ back to reading.
Wow fast reply and of course I was being over dramatic :D awesome story. need to read more faster.
Good News, Everypony
I've finally gotten over my writer's block with this story. Expect a new chapter in the next week.
That song... is perfect...
Where is it?!
can you please un-hiatus this?
This was really a pleasure to read. It was different.
are, are you gonna kill RD?
This comment reminds me of those couple times in films where a line is spoken and then reverberates as the scene shifts to much time later
That being said, a week was four weeks ago from here.
Also,...Dat Setup: I see a crisis on the horizon, but we shan't know the conclusion to it unless you write moar!!!
Expect a new chapter in the next week.
Posted 17 weeks ago.
Ugh, don't remind me
aaaaaw please! We need a buckin' continuation!
>>239650239650 Yes I agree heh
I like this chapter :D
LOL! Twilight is always preparing for the worst, isnt she? I love those books she had out. lolzers
>>700060700060 yes.... yes i did
What happened to this? People said something about awaiting new chapters, someone said something about it being on-hiatus, and right now it's complete? Well it's not complete...that can't be the end of the story...I sad bro :(
I decided to mark it as "complete" because it's a series of short vignettes—short stories not related to each other besides the fact that they all are TwiDash. In a way, this story has always been "complete." It might still receive a few more short stories, but really it's not a continuing story; rather, it's a collection of shorts.
As for what happened to it? Really, it's the simple fact that I fell out of love with TwiDash for a good while. I've done a turn and "like" the pairing again, but now I have so many other incomplete fics that this one has simply been pushed aside.
Yeah but there actually seemed to be a story that was happening throughout the little snippets
I can see how you could see it that way, but that wasn't my intention.
ninety-nine red balloons
I see what you did there.
This just made my day.