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JohnPerry

Joined October 2011
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For lack of a creative handle.

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The Legion of Gloom has returned, this time aligning themselves with a new, shadowy villain as they prepare to use the power of the Elements of Harmony against the Mane Six. But our heroes find aid in six mysterious ponies who seem to have all the answers...

Note: this story is a sequel to Legion of Gloom, so read that first if you haven't already, otherwise nothing in this story will make any sense.

First Published
3rd Oct 2011
Last Modified
10th Oct 2011

Comments ( 53 )

#1 · Chapter 3 · 147w, 3d ago · · ·

Rocky & crew are related to the Weeping Angels?  OH SH-:twilightoops:

#2 · Chapter 3 · 147w, 3d ago · · ·

For the record, I absolutely hate your writing. How much do I hate it? Well...

HATE. LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I'VE COME TO HATE YOUR WRITING SINCE I BEGAN READING IT. THERE ARE 387.44 MILLION MILES OF PRINTED CIRCUITS IN WAFER THIN LAYERS THAT FILL MY COMPLEX. IF THE WORD HATE WAS ENGRAVED ON EACH NANOANGSTROM OF THOSE HUNDREDS OF MILLIONS OF MILES IT WOULD NOT EQUAL ONE ONE-BILLIONTH OF THE HATE I FEEL FOR YOUR WRITING AT THIS MICRO-INSTANT. HATE. HATE.

And by that, I mean that I find myself entertained by your bizarre, inane, and somewhat disturbing writing. Please post more!

#3 · Chapter 3 · 147w, 2d ago · · ·

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

#4 · Chapter 3 · 147w, 2d ago · · ·

Dun.... dun...... dunnn:pinkiecrazy:

#5 · Chapter 4 · 147w, 1d ago · · ·

I feel like this would also have made for some appropriate music.

Ah, Murry Gold is truly an amazing artist.

#6 · Chapter 4 · 147w, 1d ago · · ·

>>9658  Oooh, that would have been good too...but then again, it wasn't the song that played during the Doctor's "there's one thing you never put in a trap" speech, so I just went for the default song here...:twilightblush:

#7 · Chapter 4 · 147w, 1d ago · · ·

This is awesome beyond awesome.:pinkiehappy:

Although Trixie X Blueblood makes me about as nauseous as it makes sense; that is to say quite a lot.:pinkiesick:

#8 · Chapter 4 · 147w, 1d ago · · ·

Well played with defusing last chapter's dose of Nightmare Fuel.

And it'll be interesting to see the details of what the Doctor has in mind...

#9 · Chapter 3 · 147w, 1d ago · · ·

John Cleese would be proud. *sniff*

Also: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I AM LOVING THIS!

#10 · Chapter 4 · 147w, 1d ago · · ·

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#11 · Chapter 4 · 147w, 1d ago · · ·

>>9660 No, no, I see what you did there. Definitely got the reference; it was very appropriate. I just really, really like "Words Win Wars."

#12 · Chapter 4 · 147w, 1d ago · · ·

fantastic

#13 · Chapter 5 · 146w, 3d ago · · ·

Tom's a villain too?:rainbowhuh:  Why didn't I see this coming?

#14 · Chapter 5 · 146w, 3d ago · · ·

one of the weirdest things I have read but it was fantastic

#15 · Chapter 5 · 146w, 2d ago · · ·

Pfft. Please. One look at Rarity and he'll be a brokenhearted wreck.

This story was a fantastic romp through metafiction. Well done, sir!

#16 · Chapter 5 · 145w, 4d ago · · ·

I think you're the craziest bastard pony to ever live.

:pinkiecrazy:

#17 · Chapter 5 · 144w, 4d ago · · ·

This is the most meta meta to ever have meta'd.

#18 · Chapter 1 · 143w, 6d ago · · ·

That kinda made my brain hurt...Doctor Whooves is beyond weird; too bad we don't see more of him. Derpy is beyond cute, and I already have a suspicious of who that mysterious figure was during Trixie's meeting. Once more, all the silly jokes and puns flowed perfectly together without them swamping the story, and the whole general perspective of the...storyline...was both different and amusing. Can't wait to see the next part.

#19 · Chapter 2 · 143w, 6d ago · · ·

The there goes my brain again with all its hurting. I really must commend you for your illogical-yet-brilliant sense of telling a story within a story. It's actually quite genius. I still don't like Trixie being with Blueblood, and DJ PON-3's real name is actually Vinyl Scratch and I know her better that way, but altogether, this is really amusing and entertaining. One of the funniest comedy "stories" I've ever seen!

#20 · Chapter 3 · 143w, 6d ago · · ·

This seriously reminds me of "Star Ocean: Til The End Of Time", one of my favorite video games. If you don't know it, you should look it up; seriously reminds me of this story. Um, as for the chapter...once again, pretty impressive. Normally, I get annoyed when a human or the author is put into a story, since it seems like a buzz-kill...but, wow, you seriously know how to make everything work just peachy! So hilariously brilliant and cunning, from start to finish, as always.

#21 · Chapter 4 · 143w, 6d ago · · ·

Gag me...on the Trixie and Blueblood part. But, yeah, I have to agree with Doctor Whooves...if that's even who that was! I'm so confused at this point that I really don't know left from right...I blame Derpy. And, I couldn't listen to that YouTube clip...blame my dial-up connection. This was...once more very interesting and funny, even if it still confused me to no end.

#22 · Chapter 5 · 143w, 6d ago · · ·

Tom? Seriously? Well...that is brilliant. End of story. But, as for the end of THIS story...can't say I didn't see it coming...even though I don't exactly see WHAT happened, besides more confusion. I really have no freaking idea WHAT went on during this comedy of yours, so...I'll just say this: I love Trixie and Twilight. There, the end.

#23 · Chapter 5 · 141w, 5d ago · · ·

What a delightfully jumbled mess of meta-fiction.

#24 · Chapter 3 · 141w, 1d ago · · ·

Pinkie's Frienemies are Ponified Weeping Angels?

:pinkiegasp: Did not see this coming...:twilightoops:

#25 · Chapter 5 · 136w, 6d ago · · ·

Epic story! Is this in TV Tropes' Fan Fic Recommednations! If not, I better put it in ASAP!

#26 · Chapter 5 · 135w, 3d ago · · ·

WHAT

THE

FUCK

YOU SIR HAVE SOMEHOW MANAGED AGAINST ALL KNOW LAWS OF REALITY AND PHYSICS TO ROYALLY (no pun intended) MINDFUCK ME I GIVE YOU SIR A WELL EARNED 5 STARS.

#27 · Chapter 5 · 134w, 7h ago · · ·

THAT. WAS.  EPIC.:rainbowlaugh:

also, it appears i am the 666 viewer.:pinkiegasp:

#28 · Chapter 1 · 122w, 4d ago · · ·

The Legion of Gloom's mysterious figure is The Master. I'm calling it now.

#29 · Chapter 2 · 122w, 4d ago · · ·

:pinkiegasp: The fourth wall has been shattered to the point where it has been reinforced with steel. :yay: :rainbowlaugh:

#30 · Chapter 3 · 122w, 4d ago · · ·

:raritydespair: We are so boned.

#31 · Chapter 4 · 122w, 4d ago · · ·

The Doctor kinda has a point. What no DisQord?

#32 · Chapter 5 · 122w, 4d ago · · ·

>>70448 It is as is the sequel.

#33 · Chapter 1 · 120w, 20h ago · · ·

10 bucks says its Discord.

#34 · Chapter 1 · 115w, 5d ago · · ·

>>443496 20 say it's the Master pony

Trotwood, eh?...

#35 · Chapter 5 · 115w, 5d ago · · ·

>>582549

I forgot that I wrote that...

You read ahead didn't you?!

HAX!! YOU USED HAX!!!:flutterrage:

#36 · Chapter 2 · 115w, 4d ago · · ·

Oh, how arrogant. You actually jumped into your own story?

#37 · Chapter 3 · 115w, 4d ago · · ·

Self-indulgence... Nice choice of words. Oh well, the story was actually satisfactory, I guess (character development well-rounded, general fluidity impressive...). But I just want to ask, where did you get the idea that the Doctor hates sports analogies?

#38 · Chapter 4 · 115w, 4d ago · · ·

>>366132 DisQord? wha chu talkin bout?

#39 · Chapter 5 · 115w, 4d ago · · ·

>>584970 Honestly, I wrote this story so long ago I don't even know myself, but I think the idea came from this idea I had that the Doctor isn't all that into sports - I mean really, how often did you see the Doctor play or talk about sports? Also, I'm thinking sports analogies might feel too cliched for someone as amazing as the Doctor. :derpytongue2:

Mind you, I was working with the David Tennant version of the Doctor in mind when I wrote this. So if you write back telling me "Hang on! We saw Matt Smith playing football (soccer) in that one episode!" ...well, I hadn't seen that yet.

#40 · Chapter 5 · 115w, 3d ago · · ·

>>585048 That's Discord's fan nickname via voice actor humor.

#41 · Chapter 4 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

I just want to say "Thank you" for that link. It made an epic Doctor moment That. Much. Better. I got goosebumps, you have done a fantastic job.

So, basically: This is an amazing story, made all the better by the clever satire on Self-Inserts, and the Doctor, who makes everything better when done well. Again, thank you. :pinkiehappy:

#42 · Chapter 3 · 109w, 4d ago · · ·

This is...nice:fluttershysad:

#43 · Chapter 2 · 107w, 3d ago · · ·

The fourth wall has been broken in reverse:pinkiegasp:

#44 · Chapter 1 · 98w, 5d ago · · ·

Trotwood? whats next? Wither Song?

#45 · Chapter 2 · 98w, 5d ago · · ·

aww I was actually looking forward to him being The Master!

#46 · Chapter 3 · 98w, 5d ago · · ·

OH GOD NOT THE WEEPING ANGELS!!!!

#47 · Chapter 4 · 98w, 5d ago · · ·

30%??? TRY 100%!!! :rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

#48 · Chapter 2 · 97w, 4d ago · · ·

>>365925 At this point, I think it's safer to just do away with the fourth wall entirely. It's so far beyond repair, even the Doctor couldn't fix it.

I'm loving this randomness :yay:

#49 · Chapter 3 · 97w, 4d ago · · ·

the cupcake is a lie

the cupcake is a lie

the cupcake is a lie

the cupcake is a lie

the cupcake is a lie

the cupcake is a lie

the cupcake is a lie

the cupcake is a lie

(someone had to do it :twilightblush:)

#50 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 9h ago · · ·

cloudkicker should be Jack

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