What greater aspiration and challenge are there for a mother than the hope of raising a great son or daughter?
- Rose Kennedy
These are the moments of a baby dragon and a Alicorn princess who had raise him to become who he is today. The struggles he'll face in his childhood and his mother struggle to move on from the sins she had created thousand of years ago.
Cover art is not mine, It belongs to the awesome artist, Tuyla, on DeviantART.
My Little Pony does not belong to me, it belongs to Hasbro and the creator of the show, Lauren Faust.
IN NEED OF PROOFREADERS
Chapters (4)
... You made my day, it is nice to see a story such as this today. I look forward to seeing were you will take this tale.
Oh and I tend to imagine Celestia singing this to her child:
2981081 Very nice song, but since this story is a side project and I'm busy with other stories. So, updates may be slow.
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And your point? You did Momlestia, not just that but the one World of God relationship that the fandom tends to ignore. I can wait for anything that shows Celestia as she truly is.
2981117 Yeah I did, Celestia is the pony that I like. A pony that is willing to sacrifice for the common good, regardless of how unmoral it is.
I see her as a warrior. A warrior that will fight for her ponies, her sister, her family against all threats. She may like to solve situations by talking, but she is willing to use violence to solve it.
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I think you mentioned that on Protect Celestia. Silk Hiding Steel, and on TVTropes Celestia and Cadence are used as examples
Awww
That is a soft story with nice feelings. Baby Spike is cute!
I think you meant "felt".
And here, "Castle".
I think this part isn't grammatical... I suggest : "But there hasn’t been any incident between her son and the guards, who wouldn't make any mistakes towards him, for fear of suffering a mother's wrath if they ever raised one hoof against him."
2984941 Sorry for the late reply, but anyways, thank you for finding those errors. I'll fix them now.
2984941 I'm sorry about that, it was my job to make sure all the mistakes were fixed, and I obviously missed those.
this deserves more attention
3052710 Thank you for the comment. Chapter 2 is already done, but since my proofreader has school, it might take a while.
Wow. This is good...really good
3104987 You're welcome, dude.
A good story so far, but there are grammatical/spelling errors that degrade the quality a little. Fix the errors, and I would say this would be a near-perfect opener.
interesting...
so what are humans in this? an old star faring race that popped by in Equestria history once? old arcane beings of great mystery and magical power? an advanced society that once ruled all but then buggered off somewhere or wiped themselves out?
3159376 Sorry, can't give out any information that might spoiled the story.
Somewhat misinformed....? I'd love to see those books..
3160790 Thank you for the comment, but I'm currently looking for a new proofreader since mine left due to problems in his life. If you know anyone who proofreads, I'll be really thankful.
Me too
Spike is how old in this fic ?
3428974 right now he is 4
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Okay, I'm scare now. What did I do to get all these spike mustaches?
3431855 EVERYTHING
3432018 Please explain.
3431855 For writing a nice well written Spike story and it's the only Spike icon here.
3432031 you did nothing wrong. I'm just really tired and just watched Spider-Man 3 where Spider-Man is talking to the sandman in the tunnel and Spider-Man says. "Do you remember Ben Parker!? The man you shot down in cold blood!?" Sandman replies "What's it matter to you!?". Then Spider-Man says "EVERYTHING!" Yea. I just wanted to say that to someone. The story is fantastic. I only put the mustaches because the guy below me did. Wow I'm tired. That's a long comment. Oh well. Hope I didn't bore you with my explanation. Good night.
3432065 Thank you.
3432031 Simple, pure awesomeness and cuteness in this chapter and the wait for the next chapters =D
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4 years old yes ?
I just love you Celestia.....
Keep going!
3432106 jeezzz
ok lets duo this dawwwwwwwwwwwwww
"You might wanna change the cover pic. It's to bloody adorable."
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NOPE!
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School... it begun.
Turkey is always good. Thats why there a holiday which we eat it on.
3568247 I don't want to be disrespectful, but how is this comment relation to the story?
3570336 Author's Notes
3570374 Oh, forgot about that author note, right there. Sorry for that.
3570382 It's cool.