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63w, 4dFebruary Write Off
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Fascinating! Outstanding! Amazing! That and so much more! I loved this story, though I'll admit I almost did not read it since it was labeled as dark, but I'm glad I did. Everything about this story was simply put, jaw dropping. I would have never seen that plot twist coming towards me even if it was blaring loud music. And the rubber duck scene! I laughed out loud in class cause of that scene. Now onto a more serious criticizing. The scene when Twilight saw discord on the throne and the others looked at twilight weirdly. I feel as if they should have reacted more since discord has traumatized them each in their own ways, insomuch that they fear even the slightest mention of his name. Besides that one scene I have no other problems.
All in all, you ma'm/sir have great talent. Bravo and encore!
Chilling. Just chilling. I can't wait for more!!
I wonder how far Discord will push her...
This is pretty good; I've never really read a satisfying fic about Discord haunting someone (though there have been plenty of attempts). A shame it never continued.







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