Lurk and Read fimfic, trying to get back into my stories but I mostly rp.
Inspired by Well Dressed Ninja's My Little Pony: Friendship is Miniature, this focuses more on a single pony of incredibly reduced stature and how a human deals with hilarity and headaches that ensue from a princess discovering the show and its fanbase from Lullaby for a Princess to Molestia as she tries to find her way home. Of course, that doesn't mean she is free from all the horrors and comedic obscenities it holds.
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Pretty cute beginning. There are a bunch of capitalization errors mostly. A lot of sentences starting without capitals. A couple tiny spelling or grammar errors here and there but nothing TOO glaring. Just the frequent missing caps are what I noticed.
I tried to read this because the premise is awesome but there are a lot of grammatical errors...also you should always capitalize the first letter of a word in the beginning of someone speaking
A good idea would be to find a prereader who can help u fix these mistakes before u post again....if u don't know where to find one there are editing groups in the groups section!
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Yes I've been trying to find one but the ones I've contacted haven't responded back. Doing this on my phone with the Swype function has made me write this much faster but at the obvious cost of grammatical issues. >:[
Anyways thanks for taking time to read it and let me know what's up. Hopefully I can have this fixed within the next week at the latest.
Oh man, I wanna read this, but the warnings from the comments is discouraging... I really hope it's not as bad as I'm picturing it to be.
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Bam! Fixed thanks to pcnh00!
love it
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Thanks, honestly I thought this guy was going to flop like the last one. The first hour it was up was not a totally nerve wracking start
2904826 Wow, either those other guys were exagerating, you went to town on correcting those errors, or I'm just terrible at picking up said mistakes, cause I didn't detect any.
And I enjoyed the first chapter to, hoping more will be made!
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All , thanks to my awesome editor pchn00
I'm almost finished with the rough draft for the next chapter so it will be published before the end of the week.
Very good, I await the next chapter.
Princess Celestia turned mini. and place in a different world ....Congratulations, you've got my attention.
Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens. 
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Thank you both for giving it a chance, once the chapter is run by my proofreader/editor I will post it up. It should be in within some time today
2913658 "-so it will be published before the end of the week."
So the author claims...
oh please let Celestia find some clop, or at least regular porn.
i can just imagine her reaction
2917030 Celestia I would like you to meet your 'sisters' Trollestia and Molestia.
2917131 haha
''how did you find out about that?!''
2917137 I imagine her reaction would be her in a fetal position sucking on one hoof.
2917140 heh, or full rage mode (including royal canterlock)
let here find mlp cupcakes that will make a intesting chapter
Eh? Why does she care that Lenny is naked? Ponies are naked all of the time, I thought they'd have gotten past their bits being visible.
Nice interactions between Lenny and Celestia. Ok, suggestion time. Lets see, well you could have her mess up on her typing when she tries to find things out about Twilight, instead of her student let her first find bits of the book and Movie, Then onto the Rainbow factory, Cupcakes, and just for good measured fun let her stumble upon the animal planet channel. As to what happens on the channel that's all up to you. Last but not least, or first if you want, let her find the fanfictions as well as Her Alternate version of herself, Good ol' Molly and Gamer Luna.
That should probably send her for a loop and a half. LOL
2917351 Don't forget, Ponies have natural clothing called Fur coats that cover everything on them. If anything Tia is just being respectful simple as that.
How about Discord/Celestia R34?
she's looling up for twilight probably, after all it says she was going to do something about twi in the last paragraph, so mabye she'll accedently come across Twilight R34
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sorry typing too fast
Derpibooru (And Lenny is already logged in... with Explicit pictures enabled) or 4chan
Lenny! You FOOL!
And now to imagine the worst possible results...
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Definitely involves scat...
Anyways, I suggest that Lenny begin investing in a flamethrower.
Please let Celestia find Cupcakes.
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Thank you all for the suggestions, though they will not all be used immediately. I will only say one thing about the next chapter. One of you nine is in it.
Altighty then
2929484 Cool, can't wait for the next chapter.
2929484 GAH! Curse your wretched teasing!
Now to study the other eight to best guess whom it is.
Where did I leave those binoculars...
2931237 Here you go.
The Twilight book and movie series perhaps?
why is my name here....
then i realized it my name then my brain hurts then in a minute i started to laugh,awesome ,bro
im reading then my name comes up and an i go
LOL Poor Celestia, I do feel sorry for her since she's new to the Internet.
Yeah, one of the first few things that I learned about the internet and especially google, don't forget to read the descriptions! Also don't always click on the first link, it can sometimes cause you trouble in your future lol.
Cool, so it was Copy_cat that made it into the chapter, awesome. Congrats to you!
Did you mean to put "a Kingdom" or something else or is this correct?
Also side note: Pacific Rim Rocks!!
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It's written as intended. Kingdom sounded a little too subjective to me and I wanted it to feel a little more personal.
Corresponding side note: images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110924024460/mlp/images/thumb/3/3b/Gilda_mustache_s01e05.png/640px-Gilda_mustache_s01e05.png was there ever any doubt? It's a movie about giant robots kicking monster flank, instant win in my books.
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To be completely honest your name stuck because of your mess up earlier. As annoying as autocowrecks are they can get you noticed XD and this time it worked in your favor.
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I've only recently found out about this story...
Intriguing!
As you can see however, I have changed my screen name to Cor Thunder. hint hint
Celestia looked at the internet and the internet looked back.
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Well holy crap I didn't expect to draw your attention. I hope your enjoying the fanfic your own helped spawn
WHAT IF: When Celestia disappeared from her world and ended up in Lenny's room, everything that was Celestia on EQD just disappeared. Like someone just up and cut out every image of Celestia in every drawing/image/picture and left everything else.
That's what I was getting at in the last chapter when Lenny said that there was a problem. .....though now that I'm thinking about it that wouldn't make much sense since Tia was seen in the MLP porn stuff......just a thought that you could use. Hope it somehow helps.
Also, as for who should show up next with Tia....go with Chrysalis. Twilight is cool to go with, but I think that it would be interesting to see how Chrysi would react to everything and also see how well Lenny does at being the peace keeper between the two.
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and my heart died a little just thinking about it but it does give me a little something to play with though at the end of this story on whether or not I turn this into a tragicomedy.
For a second I thought you were talking about a My Little Dashie ending
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I cant immediately answer those questions because the passage of time isnt the only thing explained in the next chapter. As for those pertaining to miniature lenny I can definitely clarify. I meant a miniature Lenny in equestria being cared for by one of the three but I never really thought of one where she is on earth 
Now THAT is an idea!
3477762 WAIT, something like that happens in "My little Dashie"? Now I KNOW I need to read that story now.
3477774 Man my little dashie is what got me into this whole fimfiction business!
It. Is. Amazing. 
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Yay, Chryssie... Where on the good-evil spectrum is she?
4950995 Are predators truly evil?
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No, predators are not evil but I'm asking more along the lines of is she a greedy tyrant or a sarcastic b
4951175 the second one. Obviously the sort who would go out of her way to screw with Celestia because why not?
