Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash discover that two of their friends have romantic feelings for one another and resolve to unite them. Their plans don't work out, however, and they find that love can be catching.
Aw, that was so cute.
Nice job with the story, not bad at all.
oh and here's my likes
Awwwwwww. Pinkie Dash is best shipping. ^_^
Oh gawd... this can't end well
really... its over already.. why do half of the romance stories stop after the first confession..
And then they all fucked.
P.S. >>232912232912 - because getting to that confession is the bigger part of romance. After that, it`s Kirche, Kinder, Küche.
Maybe you should just write a clopfic sequel. Then stare on it despondently, exclaim - "What had science done!?" and promptly go mad from revelation. Oh, and post it immediately thereafter.
I don't think I could manage a good clopfic. "Insert tab A into slot B" comes to mind.
Joking aside, is there an actual interest in a sequel to this? I certainly don't have anything planned for a continuation, but quite a few people have added it to their tracking lists. I finished it where I did to imply a "happily ever after" ending. If I did do a sequel, it would have to have to put the relationship in jeopardy somehow and potentially spoil the feel-good ending.
...I`ve been in the same spot as you with Horn Care, actually. Had no intention to make it more then first paragraph, but then... and this... and after that... and now I have a second chapter and third in works and what is that I don`t even...
Meh. That`s just how things end sometimes.
As for sequel, you have to remember that just saying "I love you." does not guarantee immediate and complete compatibility. Simply writing a one-two chapter followup that would showcase how their relationship works, what boundaries they have to establish, how do they share time and reconstruct their lives to allow for romance - that works. With a side order of painfully shy romance between Applejack and Fluttershy.
This is going to be a comedy of errors.
Wow, that was great! I did feel it went a little quickly, but i guess thats fine. The story was full of DA'WWWWW!!!
Haha! Up yours Flutterjack, make room Pinkiedash!
hehe, great job Moabite!
>>232956232956 I don't think I could manage a good clopfic. "Insert tab A into slot B" comes to mind.
On the contrary, that sounds like the perfect start to an inexperienced-Twilight humorous clopfic!
Edit: or a Pia Ikea clopfic, I suppose.
So. Much. Cute.
Ha! Clever story. Very nice.
Y U no have more comments?
This is brilliant, Mah Boi!
Pinkie Pie frowned sulkily. "Dumb physics. Always ruining my fun."
That phrase is SO FULL OF WIN
>>233105233105 agreed man agreed
And it begins...Oh Pinkie.
I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say you're somewhat English...
As others have said, this was rather cute. It's also a nice change from the usual form of shipfic. And of course, it is the best ship. I very much enjoyed this
I'd love a sequel involving the Fluttershy/Applejack dynamic; possibly some Big Macintosh action thrown in as a curveball?
Not a bad idea. Shift the focus to the other couple with RD/PP taking a back seat. Might be good for a long epilogue or a different story entirely. I'll think about it.
Ah! I was close. It's hard to tell them apart in writing.
>>233105233105 I prefer Flarity myself
But Pinkie, you don't have to let physics ruin the fun! Your Pinkie Pie, Newton could be all like "gravity keeps us down!" And you could be all like "Nuh-uh!" Then float up, and why? Because your BUCKING PINKIE PIE!
OMG THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL
dammit you brilliant writer! now you make me wish equestria was real so i could date a pony.
take this like and get out of my face
i'm going to read this whitin 10 hours
so i'm dating Dashie here??
heh... the part with the free stamp... that is so pinkie and you really got me there, i was like: ah now she go find the misplaced love letter... and then i was like: lol, silly me, i should have known better XD
Excellent ship swap
I'm thinking a sequel based around Applejack and Fluttershy, and also some Twilight and Rarity, just so you can drag it out for another few chapters.
I am loving Pinkie Pie in this story so far
Pinkie Pie obeying the laws of physics?!? Where's the black hole that's associated wih this?!
Ship fics like this make me read Moar ship fics. Well done.
I would love for a sequel to reveal that Rainbow and Pinkie knew the whole time.
The awkwardness would be doubled, of course.
I loved the carrot cake joke
It's a great fic.
When it comes to the mane 6 we love them all in any combo. I have my own favorites, but a win is still a win whenever someone cares enough to write their story. These unintentional twists to their plans can be the most rewarding. Dash, Pinkie, you deserve all the best.
This story is an excellent argument against the misconception that stories need to be long to be good.
Looking forward to seeing more great stories from you.
This story was a little short, but I loved it all the same.
This is why I love PinkieDash stories, every one is different, different purpose, different conflict, there's a lot of variety in these stories compared to most of the mane cast shipping.
Appleshy isn't really my thing but I have no issues with it so I like this.
I dunno, I mean I gues it is cute, but it seems a little wierd as the ponies start going lesbian for each other. Left me kinda like
This story was so cute, adorible, and sweet it gave me diabeties. Read it with a huge smile on my face.
It was really good! 5/5
dumb physics never ruins Pinkies fun. you could simply replace it with "sometimes". The love letters you wrote for them almost made me cry.
>>233573233573 Jailbot is ABSOLUTELY right! This is the perfect start for more AJ/FS storyline, and Big Mac has a crush on Carrot top? You could even let us see how pinkie and Dash are managing Lawfish didn't you see the lack of decent stallions in the hearts and hooves day episode? Plus I happen to love this mane 6 shipping stuff as I get jealous every time I read a f/m ship.
Oh my goodness this is so sweet. They probably shouldn't have written those parts about getting to their true loves and what not. That's what really set it up. So cute.
I honestly like the taste of RainbowPie. Good show, my friend. Thumbs up