Fly With Me

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Every year, the ponies of Equestria have check-ups at the doctor's. Scootaloo goes to hers, and she learns something that will ground all of her dreams.

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DarkSkyz

DarkSkyz #1 · Jul 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Well, Applejack did tell me not to lie...

I thought it was a very nice one-shot, with a lovely heartwarming ending.

Cricketkelly

Cricketkelly #2 · Jul 3rd, 2013 · · ·

I LOVE IT :D

It ended so quickly, though... It was still great

The Crusaders

The Crusaders #3 · Jul 4th, 2013 · · ·

Is this a true story?? :D

~Scootaloo

joe mother

joe mother #4 · Jul 4th, 2013 · · ·

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No, because that would suck.

It's actually based off of this comic:

It's so SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Neoco

Neoco #5 · Jul 4th, 2013 · · ·

I think you need to get rid of the "Tragedy" tag. This story isn't tragic. It's sad but it's not tragic. Other than that, this story is pretty nice

joe mother

joe mother #6 · Jul 4th, 2013 · · ·

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That tag was on there because I did intend for it to be more tragic; just slipped my mind to remove it.

jaybird

jaybird #7 · Jul 4th, 2013 · · ·

good story but it could've been longer and sadder and she could've actually quested her existence like the captions said she did

Mine Hoof

Mine Hoof #8 · Jul 18th, 2013 · · ·

This story was amazing omg you are an amazing wrighter!! :D

skittlez

skittlez #9 · Jul 22nd, 2013 · · ·

my feelings:

idontevengohereanymoreso

idontevengohereanymoreso #10 · Aug 31st, 2013 · · ·

First then finally

shadowminded

shadowminded #11 · Jan 10th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Only suggestion is possibly changing the chapter titel to
"dis-appointments" just because im a lover of word play. Decent story if not a little short.

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