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Emerald wake


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the story centers on Dusk Night a night unicorn who has returned to Canterlot after hearing of Princess Luna's return, he wishes to join her night guard but faces a large obstacle and struggles to surmount it.
Along the way he will laugh, prank, and fight, but will he be able to fulfill his dreams or will his dark history pull him into a nightmare he wont wake up from?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 2 )

i really hope you enjoy the story and i could really enjoy some tips considering this is my first fic...

This is really good! I like the format you wrote it in! Just a few suggestions, Capitalize all of the names and make sure some of the sentences don't run on.

(I do realize this has been out for a while)

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