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Rave Darkness is a young recruit in the Royal Air Force. He was recently re-tasked to be a support personnel for the "Wonderbolts". Will he fail, being crushed under the pressure of his new position, or succeed, with the help of his old and new friends. one thing is certain this will not be easy.
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Oh lawdy...
This seems to be a promising story.
The only problems I see are a few minor details, like spelling and grammar errors, things I don't really care about. As long as I can understand the story, I'm good.
I'm not trying to be insulting here, so don't take this the wrong way, but what was your exact though process while trying to come up with a main character's name for this fanfiction? I know it's your account, and most definitely your personal OC's name, so tell me, please.
I'm honestly curious to know how you, as the author, came up with such a name. Maybe your information could help me to better understand some writers on here.
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At least he didn't make him an alicorn, so there's that at least.
I guess.
Y'know.
2814719 Mr Pones the name comes from my OC name. The "Rave" was chosen for 2 reasons. the first was his love of dancing and not standing still. the second reason Rave was chosen was that it can describe the chaos the goes on in his mind. as raves are chaotic and confusing. Rave has a habit of getting stuck in his mind so to speak.
The "Darkness" part also comes from a physical and mental place as well. Rave loves then dark. the quite and solitude gives him the ability to quite the storm in his mind. he is a bit of a lone wolf as you will see later. the mental side is... that i have to keep a secret for now.
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Right. Thank you.
I'm liking it so far, its just an intro now, it should get more attention as the story picks up. Also, its a good idea to promote it in various groupd, it'll get more attention there as well.
guess im not the only RAVE