The Plague

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PrinceLexmarkThePrinted

PrinceLexmarkThePrinted #1 · Feb 17th, 2012 · · · The First Time ·

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Very well executed, interesting storyline (though a bit on the cliché side of "typical love potion plot"), well characterized and not too gross in the clopping section.

Have a thumbs up.

Onyx Glitch

Onyx Glitch #2 · Feb 17th, 2012 · · · The First Time ·

pedofillya i see what you did thar

NecromancerX69

NecromancerX69 #3 · Feb 18th, 2012 · · · The First Time ·

Glad to know ya post it here mate.
Keep up the awesome work.

RandomExpert781

RandomExpert781 #4 · Feb 18th, 2012 · · · The First Time ·

Story was awesome . . .
. . . Cutie Mark. . . . NO! JUST NO!

DJ Cobalt

DJ Cobalt #5 · Feb 18th, 2012 · · · The First Time ·

HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA you are awesome my friend
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oblivion2k

oblivion2k #6 · Feb 20th, 2012 · · · The First Time ·

Eh, it could have been so much better. The story concept itself was fine but the pace, dear god it felt like a nascar race. You skipped entire scenes without so much as a paragraph change at the end. Just slow down man, nobody's saying you have to write and publish the whole thing in a half hour. Try to have the next story flow a little more smoothly.

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