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The Whiskey Spirit


Your Alcoholism Made Manifest

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The Royal Guard is the steadfast wall in Equestria's defense. It is there, always protecting the citizens, for this reason Silver Lining wishes to join The Guard. Silver wants to keep his brethren safe from any harm that could befall them. He didn't expect it to be easy, in fact he was sure that he would sweat, cry, and bleed before he could call the citizens of Equestria 'safe'. He would have never guessed how right he was...

This takes place in a more industrialized Equestria, however its not apparent in the architecture, and places will be the same as in the show.

If anyone could make a cover image I will be eternally grateful, and think of some sort of reward.

If you feel I wrote a bad chapter then tell me how to fix it in the comments.

Tags and characters are subject to change.

Teen rating for violence, and strong language.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

2963957

Nature Element is best Element.:pinkiehappy:

2963974 Well she is the medic pretty much but ill make sure she has some badass moves for you.

Ps thanks for the follow.

2963994

Eeeeexcellent.

PS No problem.

Capitalization mistakes mostly for i
Misspelled

but when your on duty

Change your to you're

The Captain ordered and all the Cadets formed a strait line

Change strait to straight

DO I MAKE MY SELF CLEAR

Change MY SELF to MYSELF

Barbwire should be barbed wire

4253450 You do realize this is cancelled... right?

"Oh, come now, your selling your self short. Did you not see how you took down six ponies single handed?"

your to you're your self to yourself
waling to walking siting to sitting
CAPITALIZE THE I's

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