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Golden Vision

Joined February 2012
532 followers

I write horsewords and horseword accessories.

Stories (17)

  • Another Day For the Whooves
    Daleks in Muffintopia? The TARDIS in a galactic bubble? The Whooves have been there, done that.

    28,238 words · 11,935 views · 902 likes · 14 dislikes
  • Lies to Foals
    Sweetie Belle thought that having a Cutie Mark meant she had it made. But when she fails an audition for a prestigious part, Rarity takes her aside to teach her about special talents, high society, and the true value of hard work.
    4,894 words · 722 views · 149 likes · 1 dislikes
  • Glitched
    Twilight awakes on the day of her brother's wedding, the day she died. But that was yesterday. Confronted with an impossible situation, she must seek the truth of why she's trapped in time, for both her sake and all of reality's.
    72,842 words · 3,269 views · 221 likes · 4 dislikes
  • What We Leave Behind
    Shining Armor leaves his childhood behind.
    5,863 words · 2,589 views · 149 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Shedding Your Skin
    37,459 words · 710 views · 73 likes · 0 dislikes
  • The Riddle
    11,466 words · 2,666 views · 314 likes · 10 dislikes
  • Equestria: The Time Loop Files
    2,359 words · 3,119 views · 128 likes · 3 dislikes
  • Can I Come With You?
    7,845 words · 3,231 views · 358 likes · 15 dislikes
  • Over the Rainbow
    6,270 words · 1,077 views · 80 likes · 1 dislikes
  • In Memoriam
    17,984 words · 494 views · 53 likes · 0 dislikes

Blog Posts (85)


This story is a sequel to Can I Come With You?

Wake up, clean the TARDIS, have some tea, get chased by Daleks, have more tea, lose the Vortex, make muffins, find the Vortex, eat muffins and tea, blow up the planet.  It's just another day for the Whooves family!

...Oh, and Carrot Top has NO idea what's going on.  Just saying.

First Published
1st Apr 2012
Last Modified
9th Nov 2013

Comments ( 331 )

#1 · Chapter 2 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

This will likely be a long series of "drabbles", anywhere from 2-10 pages each, with individual chapter focusing on different parts of the fanon-born Whooves family.  Members, for those who are unaware, are Doctor Whooves, Derpy Hooves, Dinky Hooves, and Sparkler Hooves, with Derpy's friend and former roommate Carrot Top being a family acquaintance.  Hope you enjoy it!  

PS: Yes, the completed story WILL have taken place over the course of one day for the Whooves- that's just how crazy their lives are.  :derpytongue2:

#2 · Chapter 2 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

Very nice, can't wait for next chapter :pinkiecrazy::yay:

#3 · Chapter 2 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

I lol'd.

#4 · Chapter 1 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

Sparkler is DRAMATIC!!!:rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh:

i like it:trixieshiftright::ajsmug::raritywink:

#5 · Chapter 2 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

So, lemme get this straight:

DerpyXFleetwood= Dinky

DerpyXDr.Hooves= Sparkler?

#6 · Chapter 2 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

I love this. :pinkiegasp: Honestly, it's clever and really funny :rainbowkiss:

#7 · Chapter 1 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

This is fucking epic already.

#8 · Chapter 1 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

I feel the same way about my coffee. There is no mercy.

#9 · Chapter 2 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

I am so tracking this.

#10 · Chapter 2 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

That. Was. Hilarious.

Tracking.

#11 · Chapter 2 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

:flutterrage: MOAR!!!!!

#12 · Chapter 1 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·
#14 · Chapter 2 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

Thank you so much for the positive responses guys!  I'm really glad that you all enjoy the story!  :pinkiehappy:

#15 · Chapter 3 · 130w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

great celestia, this makes me giggle.

words seem to fail me at the moment, so have a comic i found;

#16 · Chapter 3 · 130w, 4d ago · · ·

This is a pretty good story. I look forward to see it finished.

#17 · Chapter 3 · 130w, 3d ago · · ·

>>392069 I love it.

#18 · Chapter 3 · 130w, 3d ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh:

#19 · Chapter 3 · 130w, 3d ago · · ·

Man this story is good so far, so that's an average morning in the Hooves house. :derpytongue2:

#20 · Chapter 3 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Please take note of the extended ending of Chapter 3.  I thought the original ended too abruptly- hopefully this wraps things up a bit more nicely :pinkiehappy: :derpytongue2:

#21 · Chapter 4 · 130w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

And here's chapter 4!  :twilightsmile:  This is a bit low on the Doctor Who/Derpy nuttiness- remember that this is a Family fic too, and I'm well within my rights to showcase some character interactions! :raritydespair:

Anyways, hope you enjoy it!  The next chapter is gonna be a real doozy!  :pinkiecrazy:

#22 · Chapter 4 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

I love Sparkler's personality in this.

#23 · Chapter 4 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

>>405695

Thank you!  :rainbowkiss:  I'd always pictured her as a kind of cross between some aspects of Twilight and Rarity- she can be snarky and deadpan, but she really does care, deep down.  :twilightblush:

#24 · Chapter 4 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

there's nothing wrong with taking a step back to see what's happening outside the chaos bubble.

lets you put things in perspective

#25 · Chapter 4 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Nice cant wait for the new chapter

#26 · Chapter 4 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

That was kind of nice:twilightsmile:

#27 · Chapter 4 · 130w, 17h ago · · ·

Cool, bro.

#28 · Chapter 4 · 130w, 16h ago · · ·

Aww, sisters!! Cute! Wish me and my sisters acted like this. Never gonna happen :rainbowlaugh: Anyyway, I'm enjoying all the insanity and the brief momers of calm. So far so good :pinkiehappy:

#29 · Chapter 4 · 130w, 11h ago · · ·

Nice update and great bonding  between the Hooves sisters, now I do wonder how they'll deal with the other siblings of Ponyville ? :derpytongue2:

#30 · Chapter 1 · 129w, 6d ago · · ·

the final number on tnat machine is OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAAAAND!!!

#31 · Chapter 3 · 129w, 6d ago · · ·

>>392069 hahaha, funny comic

#32 · Chapter 4 · 129w, 6d ago · · ·

there are no words to describe the d'aaaaaaaawwwwww in this chapter

TRACKED!

#33 · Chapter 4 · 129w, 6d ago · · ·

>>405702 how deep down?

#34 · Chapter 4 · 129w, 6d ago · · ·

>>412689

Dunno.  How many licks does it take to get to the center of a Tootsie Pop?

#35 · Chapter 4 · 129w, 6d ago · · ·

>>412698 good question

by the by, while on the subject of Miss Sparkler, i like the way you've portrayed her, so good work!

#36 · Chapter 4 · 129w, 6d ago · · ·

>>412698

401 will breach the candy shell.

#37 · Chapter 4 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

I might not stop squee'ing.  :yay:

#38 · Chapter 2 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

Please note that I've completely rewritten this chapter (Chapter 2).  Hopefully it's better this way- more "Show" and less "Tell".

#39 · Chapter 2 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

So much quirky randomness, it's like a Doctor Who sitcom... with ponies!

#40 · Chapter 3 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

I can almost hear the canned laughter. But that's definitely a good thing.  

#41 · Chapter 4 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

Sparkler and Dinky's personalities are very believable and mesh with the setting. Even though the chapter was uneventful, it makes for a great "calm before the storm" moment.

#42 · Chapter 1 · 127w, 6h ago · · ·

Just another one of those days?

#43 · Chapter 4 · 127w, 5h ago · · ·

I have laughed so hard with this story. You sir are a master mind.:rainbowkiss:

#44 · Chapter 4 · 127w, 5h ago · · ·

>>463224

I must guiltily admit that I would watch one of these with gusto.  Not that that's necessarily a bad thing :derpytongue2:

#45 · Chapter 4 · 127w, 5h ago · · ·

I thought this would be a continuation of The Three Whooves, but I guess I was wrong

#46 · Chapter 1 · 127w, 5h ago · · ·

As an avid coffee drinker myself, I find this hilarious, easy to relate to, and kinda sad at the same time.

I liked your rather deadpan narration of things. I heard a very monotone drawl, as if from a nature show quietly expounding upon the peaceful beauty of the great outdoors before the predators come by and f*** the herbivores' s*** up. It was a very enjoyable contrast to the outrageous chaos.

Lovely work with the "Less is More" dynamic with the action. I liked the very simplified external actions coupled with Sparkler's amusing (and sadly, obscenely easy to relate to) thoughts about coffee and its rightful place on a pedestal to be worshipped by the entire world. The bits about the robots confused me, but I find it funny that they're nothing more than pests, like flying metal cockroaches.

The names of certain items and furniture-at-play got me giggling. I liked the name of Sparkler's weapon, and the unusual amounts of chaos it can do, as well as the casual mention of the destruction it wrought. I especially enjoyed Dinky's "Adventures of Batcolt and Mare-Do-Well", particularly because even the inanimate objects spoke in hilariously 70's  dialogue.

Dinky's last line rang especially true. Why must things be so hilariously complex with adults?

#47 · Chapter 4 · 127w, 5h ago · · ·

>>500328

No, sadly.  Though I've read The Three Whooves, and found it an excellent fic.  Maybe I just have a soft-spot for the Doctor in general?

#48 · Chapter 4 · 127w, 5h ago · · ·

>>500332

I'm glad you liked it!  Each of the things you pointed out had me smiling in glee.  I love it when people pick that kind of thing out and hold it up!  *offers brohoof*

#49 · Chapter 1 · 127w, 5h ago · · ·

I used to feel this way.

Now I threw every coffee hating offender out the window. :pinkiecrazy:

#50 · Chapter 2 · 127w, 5h ago · · ·

"Doctor, what were you doing for the past few hundred years?"

"... you know... Stuff..." :pinkiehappy:

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