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lunabrony


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When a train ride for a school field trip turns boring, it's up to the Cutie Mark Crusaders to find a way to pass the time. All that changes when the train enters a tunnel, and each have differing views about what's on the other side.

It doesn't help that all of them have a completely wild imagination.

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Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon's quips, while horribly mean, were actually pretty clever for once. Certainly moreso than anything they've ever uttered in the show.

>"And ah'm gonna work with apples!" Bloom said proudly. "Don't know exactly how yet, but maybe ah'll deliver cart loads of apple with mah very own train!"

I'm confused... did she miss the point of what the other two said or did I? Because it looked like Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle were lamenting their lack of any idea what their cutie marks would be, and Bloom's just like "Apples!"

Still, it's a cute premise and well-written.

2794398 Admittedly I just threw that in for lulz, I should probably edit it, but I wanted her to have a bit of a derp moment. It's adorable.

:yay: Snipbelle is going up there with DiaSnails on my list of favorite foal shippings.
And Silver standing up to Diamond made :scootangel::unsuresweetie::applecry: cheer?

:trollestia:

I've had a friend once who was into shipping his friends/acquaintances, big time. The scary thing about it? He was usually right.

I'm sorry Sweetie. It's for the best... but if you truly want to divert attention away from that, remind Apple Bloom that she was the one Snips was blushing at back when she had Cutie Pox. Or that Scootaloo and he act like a couple when they're together at the Rainbow Dash fanclub... You know what? You might get out of this yet if you play your cards right!

Guys! It was Apple Bloom telling a story! This isn't a Sweetie/Snips shipping fic :rainbowderp:

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Well, at the very least Apple Bloom appears to be shipping them, is she not?^^

I´m interested what Silver´s Story will be. I like this cute little story.:twilightsmile:

"I'm surrounded by dictionaries..." Scootaloo muttered, and the two fillies raced off, deeper into the train.



LOLOLOLOLOLOLLOLLOLOL

3523343 Mind if I ask what you mean by this comment? i'm nosy:twilightblush:

Sympathies on losing the muse, I know it can be frustrating. Honestly this is a good ending for it so it's not so bad. Kudos on doing it so well for as long as you did.:twilightsmile::pinkiesmile:

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I mean that his long time absence would lead to either a canceled or a short wrap up.

References! References everywhere!

5761374 Yeah... I went a little nuts with the references in this story. I still do them but I've gotten them under control now...

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