This story is a look into the events that unfolded 1000 years ago that turned the the Crystal Empire from a harmonious paradise into a cursed dystopia.
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Very good my fine sir, I am enjoying this very much I shall follow your story. Also may I know were is this pegasus cadence story, I havent heard of it and would love to see it.
Continue :)
I seen darker but you got the idea
im liking this story a lot, I don't know why it has so little views.
2807432 Probably because of the fact that it does not have a picture, the story isn't in any groups, and because the long description tells you EXACTLY what happens in the story.
Apart from that, this story seems to be well-written, so that's not the problem; I just think the author has to rework his descriptions and throw his story into as many groups as possible.
Here's the link: http://www.fimfiction.net/manage_user/groups?group_name=
2850409 I think I'll do just that. Thanks for the suggestion
2850409
I agree; grabbing a cover art is pretty much vital.
2850508 Yep! If you want, I can put it in some groups for you if you wish. Also, submit your story to reddit! My story has gotten over 4000 referrals from that place lol.
2850527 If you wanna put my story in some groups, more power to you
2850605 Haha gimme a few mins.
2850605 Well, there we go! You can put it in more groups, but this will start you off!
2850704 Thanks a ton!
2850708 Haha yep! Enjoy the attention!
I really hope that after the abyss's help your story gets the views it deserves because it's too damn good to be ignored.
Interesting, this story is
More attention grabbing, this should be
Continue this story, you should though
2784445 Apparently, it was in the chapter book: "Twilight Sparkle and the Crystal Heart Spell", a book wherein Cadance tells her life story to Twilight.
Nice chapter as always
I suppose what cadence ignited was an equivalent of greek fire seeing how hot and hard it is to put out.
im liking this story even more as the chapters pass
FIRST VIEW/POST!!
I am loving this story, MOAR sir MOAR!!!
You are gonna post the next one shortly...right?
CURSE YOU CLIFFHANGERS CUUUURSE YOUUUU!
Well all I can say is that it was very interesting story, although short but I don't think if it could have been longer.
In other words cool story bro.
Awesome
Whoever edited this was probably pretty cool. I'm pretty sure he's the coolest.
(other news just started going through dragon code)
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
Awsomesauce
3 out of 5 mustaches 
You mixed up the Elements except for Honesty and Kindness.
S-sorry for getting mad...
No words can be said...
Here's another like...
The plot thickens! Loving this story so far
God amazing story. After reading this final chapter I’m curious as to how you would write the longest night.
You wrap everything up nicely yet leave me wanting more. Well done