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The fillies of the Filly Scouts are helpful little fillies that do what they can to help out the community. They raise money for those in need, help older ponies out when they need help and pretty much do what nice little fillies do. But is it all sugar and spice?
The lovely image of Filly Scout Noi was done by Lumorn
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2803745 I told ya I was gonna write it
Though I think the whole Mafia thing kinda feel apart before I started..... 
And the update rate is gonna be slow.
Can't upvote (too many grammar mistakes and redundant sentences) but I will say I'm glad someone is running with this concept. Keep it up, and look for an editor.
2803784 Redundant sentences? I do'n worry bout grammar cause I know I'll never get em all... but I never had any redundant sentences complaints before.
That's a realllly juicy orange.
Of course she didn't see anypony, or she wouldn't have asked.
There's some more stuff along a similar pattern. It's like "show-don't-tell" (which I hate as advice); you spend time/words describing things that 1) don't really need to be described and 2) could easily be inferred by an attentive reader. You're wordy, and not in a good way.
Do you have a pre-reader? I'll be the first to admit I can't catch this stuff in my own writing to save my life; if you'd like I'd be happy to look over stuff for grammar and such.
2803861 It was a really juicy orange?
I have a similar issue with my own writing, I do catch a few things but for the most part, having been chatting on the net since 96.... my brain has pretty much developed a filter for bad grammar and spelling.
Unless it's extremely bad.
I Just like the Idea of a Noi Story. I know it is hard to correct all the grammar mistakes, I have somone myself. But, So far, I like the Story. Thats way it give a Fav and a ThumbUp
2804597 Thanks for the fav and thumbs up.
I try my best with the grammar 
I'm not making as many mistakes with there and their as I use to at least. 
As for Noi, I always wanted to do a full story for her, she's so adorable and Lumorn had such great images for her. If you have a chance should check out his art. He has a couple of short comics as well.
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I know his art. He gave me the Link to your Story^^
2804625 Ohh cool.
Hehe silly me. Was glancing at your bronytown blog, is pretty cool.
2804634 Thanks. Hope to find a Question from you there^^
2804641 If I come up with a good question I'll ask one.
2803783 There will still be mafia. I have faith.
2807501 I have plans for Shimmer
2807769 Not her, she sucks.
2809328 No uh
dis was a nece store just lik fredde sed it be its rele cut so far plz make mur soon
2866668 I'll start working on this one again soon.
2867201 yay i like noi i wana mary her shes so cut e
2869067 She's not interested, buster.
New chapter? This is my reaction:
2904119 Glad ya like it
Just hope it's worth it, I kind of forced myself to do this one. 
So not sure how good it is.
2904210 My brother is excited as well. Noi is his waifu.
2904227 Ohhh
2904274 Along with Starbloom, Silverspoon, and just today.....Sweetie Belle.
2904285
2904335 I know.....this concerns me about what he will be like when he is older....
2904340 Mhmm
2904363 I'm going to have to have a talk with him.
Might record it.
2904399 *Nodnod*
2904439 Think I should?
I mean, it IS HIS personal life, but then again....
I DON'T CARE!
2904446 Heh you'll do what ya have to.
2904482
I shall, I shall, I shall.
2904210 It was awesome.
The chapter I mean.
2907349 Glad it was good. I kinda forced the chapter.
2908733 Would it still be considered 'On Hiatus' since you recently posted a new chapter?
2908751 Yea cause I aint sure when the next chapter is gonna be done.
2908757 MAKES SENSE TA ME.
That was sweet. You've earned my thumbs up.
2909752 Thank you very much for the thumbs up.
Still love your profile image. Is adorable.
Can I also make a pict of each of the char that are OC and not done?
6635745 Oh, sure you can make pictures of each of the OCs if you want to. The story isn't finished yet though.