Long ago, Discord was defeated. But, what happened after he was? Let's delve deeper into the lives of the Princesses. Let's see what caused Tia to banish her only sister to the moon. Let's see how Discord was truly able to come back out of stone after Luna was back home, safe and sound. Let's take a look into the past, and see how life became a Nightmare.
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Wow! I think that this is amasing!
2765986 *SPIT TAKE* Really?!
I'm curious, you don't see a lot of back-story between the time of Discords imprisonment and NMM's banishment. I'd really like to see the whole breakdown of the civility the sisters have with one another before the whole 'conflict of the celestial bodies' begins.
One note, and this is just a pet peeve of mine, you gotta write more per chapter.
I find that the best amount would be at least 1,000-2,000 words a chapter, its enough to convey some good ideas as well as give more to the reader, anything less just seems lack luster considering you write pretty well.
2766074 Thank you very much for your comment. I typically write much more in my chapters, but this is a really old fic I had. I'll try and edit it so they're a bit longer. Thank you for the good advice. ^^
The Nightmare started out as 153 words.
Wow.
So. I just watched Bronycurious for the first time, and I just so happened to watch the episode "Whats wrong with the Nightmare Moon arc". Does it scare anybody else that the major plot holes are filled with the ideas I have for this Fan Fic? I'm not talking about the external forces, like the time limits of the episode. I'm talking about the element aspects. Where he talks about the prophecy. I'm seriously scared cause this works with the MLP Canon.
I hope you all enjoyed the story... and.. yes. More is to come. ^^;; Just as soon as i learn how to make a sequel on this site~
Discord seems to be a lot like Darth Plagueis in this story.
2792502 I... don't actually know who that is.
2792506 guy from Star Wars, made life, then said life bit him in the butt.
2792815 I disagree completely. I see Discord as just that: The God of Chaos. He needs no reason to be evil, just for the sheer fact that he loves it. He doesn't think that life bit him in the butt; he just thinks he lost a mere game. Still, he has his puppets to control, just as all manipulators in our lives do. Of course, this is my personal opinion.
Well either way its a great story and I hope to see more of it
Been thinking about re-writing this when I have the time. Maybe just adding/editing some stuff in the chapters.
Oh no.... I'm sorry but I have a habit of hating stories where Discord is the bad guy! ( i like Discord because of his reformation only )But, I thank you for showing me your story! May I advise a story for you? if I where you, I would look up alarajrogers on this site. She make tons of great stories! :3
4807358 It's a shame you won't give others stories a try. ^^ Oh well. I hope you enjoy everything else you read. (I, personally, love Discord as a true evil villain, and not the hokey comedian the show made him out to be.)
So this was one of your earlier writings? Not bad. makes you question things a little.
Off topic. You read background pony yet?
6577207 This is actually my EARLIEST writing, the very first fanfiction I've written. I might do a re-write one day.
Also, never read Backgroud Pony
Finally got around to reading this story. Here's my criticism.
The story moves forward a little fast. The characters are a little underdeveloped, and the fast pace makes Luna seem like nothing.
Honestly, though, you got a like from me because of this last chapter. This chapter really shows how Discord is sometimes the puppeteer. And it fits within the canon story, as it raises questions in Season 4 and 5, is Discord evil still or is he truly reformed
Perfect.
Edit: WHY haven't you finished the sequel yet?
7065204 I agree completely with your criticisms! This was my baby fanfiction, so yeah, it took awhile. Also, xD I haven't finished the sequel because honestly, it dropped off my radar, and it sorta felt like it wasn't even good? Like, it sort of went places I never imagined it would, and now it's there and I have NO idea how to finish it. I should really start working on it again; I guess I just got so caught up in other fics (Namely Miss Sparkle).
7065229 Well this is a brand new concept, so it might be worth picking up again. Just a thought. I've read through your other stuff and it's grown better!
7065233 Oh, thank you! :)
7065238 You're welcome. Now to get back to reading 120 completed stories...
(aka 3000+chapters)