Well first of all, it's spelled mannequin, not mannikin.

That aside though, this was pretty enjoyable, if confusing.  I'm curious, though - was that rainbow speck at the end meant to be Rainbow Dash?

A bit confusing at first, but I liked it

>>224809224809

Thanks for pointing that out. I got the two meanings confused. I've corrected that now.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yes, it was the one and only.

Every tree within a one-mile radius was now vertical

They usually are, vertical means up and down. Horizontal means side to side. I think you were looking for "Diagonal" which is between the two.

Fun story, just a trifle.

>>233529233529

The things that get past me... Thanks for pointing that out. I've now fixed this, though I meant horizontal rather than diagonal because the blast completely flattened them. I also deleted a couple of comments of yours because they were one comment posted three times.

>>233823233823

Thanks. I usually delete my own boo boos but the fimfiction server was being wonky on me.

I've modified this from Overkill to The Campaign for Extra Trixie and other experiments because I liked these segments. I didn't know whether to post them separately or together, but I liked the idea of having a little corner for flash fictions (if that's the correct term - I sometimes get them confused with short stories), so here they are.

I've been a little inactive recently. This is partly because I'm reading other fanfics (and reading in general), partly because of life in general, and partly because I'm toying with a few ideas and I don't want them published until I've got all the bugs worked out. In the meantime, happy reading!

Sounds good to me! Where do I sign up?

Recently, I've moved a chapter from here and re-posted it as a separate story in its own right. I liked it too much for it to remain comparatively obscure among these little experiments. The story is, or will be (depending on when you read this), Dare To Be Awesome, a Daring Do short. I thought I'd post this in case old readers wondered why I'd suddenly dropped a chapter.

I'm moving another chapter from here again. It's going to be One Apple Short, formerly "Saddle On Up, It's Going To Be A Big One". As it's going to be a random, don't expect it to be serious. Again, this is just a heads-up in case people wonder why this has dropped by another chapter.

I don't even

>>624988624988

In my defence, I did tag this as Random, so WYSIWYG. That said... I'll admit it's not my best work, as it was acting mostly as a characterization exercise for Bonbon.

I was thinking (a dangerous pastime, I know): the submission rules state that multi-story, uh, stories aren't permitted. I've already removed a couple of chapters from here and posted them as separate stories. Should I take all but one down, since this seems to violate the rule, or should I leave it as it is, since there are precedents that haven't been removed?

EDIT: Since nobody's made a fuss over it, and there are precedents, I'll leave it. - 30th July 2012

Oof. Berry Punch lost a lot of money here.