A Bittersweet Day to Remember

What should have been a good day got a bit crazy. Now everything is fine and everypony should be happy, right?

Then, why is Twilight crying?

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vazak

vazak #1 · Jun 20th, 2013 · 2 · ·

That was excellently written and extremely sad as well. I hope one day to find a Twidance story with a happy ending for them. But regardless, this was extremely well written, very atmospheric and the internal dialogue was very well written and the story slots perfectly into canon.

Cheer

Cheer #2 · Jun 20th, 2013 · · ·

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Dang dude. That. Wow. Thanks. That's awesome to hear as my first comment.

Oh and yeah, the canon fitting is exactly what I was going for.

Xaldon Ajide

Xaldon Ajide #3 · Jun 20th, 2013 · · ·

I second Vazak's opinion.

vazak

vazak #4 · Jun 20th, 2013 · · ·

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No problem, it was a great story after all and it blended into canon perfectly.

khatre

khatre #5 · Jun 20th, 2013 · · ·

It is hard to find a good Twilight/Cadance story that is more than just a clopfic ....
There are a few comedy but they are far more comedy than romance.

Shadow_Wolf

Shadow_Wolf #6 · Jun 21st, 2013 · · ·

Very well done

Notamiracle

Notamiracle #7 · Jun 21st, 2013 · 1 · ·

I like these kinds of stories; simple, textured one-shots that fit right into the series like an invisible puzzle piece. Great job, you had me guessing 'til the last sentence!
PS "TwiDance" is a new one for me!

Antor

Antor #8 · Apr 8th, 2014 · · ·

thank you for not spoiling the story in the tags, I've seen it done so many times and in a story like this one the final little piece is what makes the whole thing worthwhile in my eyes!

Cheer

Cheer #9 · Apr 8th, 2014 · 1 · ·

4204318 Hehe. I know right? but to be fair. the other one isn't actually IN the story physically so I don't really need a tag after all.

ArguingPizza

ArguingPizza #10 · Apr 9th, 2014 · 3 · ·

This was stomach-churningly sad. Its a damn good thing when a story with only a little under 1200 words makes me feel like I'm going to throw up(in a good way.) its kind of hard to say 'this is so good I want to throw up' but there you go.

out of 5