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Deyeaz


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{Rated Teen for swearing} {Anthropomorphic} {Labeled "Dark" due to mild racism/derogatory slurs, as well as some emotionally upsetting moments in time} {OC x Octavia shipfic.}

It's tough being different. The suspicious glances, the unusual stares, the rumours based off of gossip and not cold, hard facts. All of it stemming from how you look, or act.

Midnight Oil: while being very different, he seemed to be content with this status in mind. He was proud of his intellect, magic prowess, his line of work as a scribe for the Princesses, and his heritage as a unicorn Sarosian—A "bat pony", in a sense—living in Canterlot.

Octavia Philharmonica: A drop-dead beauty, extremely talented with the cello, well-known, and highly respected. She's a member of one of the most prestigious families in Canterlot, and utilises that status to elevate to the top.

And upon meeting each other, both hated the other to the ends of the earth.

When the former must serve the latter for two months after he had unknowingly committed a misdemeanor, will the two's hate for one another remain the same, or will tolerance and love claw through abhorrence's black veil?

Opposites such as these two will no doubt attract… and will drive each other absolutely insane.


Whoo, boy. I'm gonna have FUN with this.

This one was inspired by a few things, rather than a newfound love for Octavia - now my favourite background pony. This was partially inspired by the anime Toradora! and the book The Kite Runner. But this was mostly inspired by you guys. You guys are beautiful, and everything you do is great (Except clopping: Celestia frowns upon that shit.)

I also made the cover art. But if anyone has got anything that I think will trump mine, PM me, and I'll let you know.

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 125 )

Ohhh, this is going to be fun. :) Would you mind describing what their body structure is? I can't decide if they're more pony-like or human-like, if they have fur, etc. It makes things a bit confusing. Love it so far, please continue.

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Well, the structure is more pony-like. Level... 1 anthro, I think. They have fingers and are bipedal like humans, but they have fur, tails, hooves for feet, and appendages like horns or wings.

Does that answer your question, my friend?

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It does indeed. Thanks!

EDIT: Well that's awkward. It posted a response to a comment from last chapter on this chapter. Oh well.

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I should be getting around to the fourth chapter soon. Since I'll be traveling around a lot, getting WiFi so that I can upload is going to be a pain.:raritydespair:

This version of Octavia is a character I love to hate. Great job! Can't wait for more!

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You all thought this was... good? :raritystarry:

Thank you, the both of you, as well as all of those who still stuck around with this. It warms my heart immensely to wake up to spectacular comments like this. :twilightblush:

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I think I love you a little bit.
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...No homo. :twilightblush:

2812512 yup... i get that a lot JK. Well, i hope to see more chapters pop up so i can squeal and read it up... getting mixed vibes from Vinyl tho, its like she accepts midnight but shes a jerk too, definitely different from normal Vinyl but we'll see where this goes. Keep it up and fill the retinas of bronies and pegasisters with this... ART:raritystarry: P.S. I'm loving the lack of grammatical errors!

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Ah, thank you for those words of kindness. As for Vinyl, yeah, she's adjusting to him. Hopefully, for my next chapter, I can write her as super-chill, cool Vinyl. :rainbowdetermined2:

That was really quite fascinating! I love the background and the statistics! It was all very cohesive and I was never confused. My next question is slightly (probably very) plot-breaking: what other abilities, if any, does Midnight have? He clearly thinks he is just a recorder, but you've gotten me curious. It would be so great if he could shapeshift as well! He could be some kind of super-spy!!! :P Aaaaanyway, very well done. I shall now yell loudly and gesticulate wildly with my pitchfork as I start a mob that will make you write at the speed of light. :)

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Thank you very much for the praise! Had to pretty up some things, like the actual population and not the ratio, Midnight's age (24 and not 28) and when he became a scribe (seven years ago and not ten). Overall, this chapter was pretty darn okay to reread and scan for errors here and there. :scootangel:

As for Midnight's potential powers, I'll have to get back to you on that one, because I occasionally get the feeling I'm making him just a little bit OP. :unsuresweetie:

And an angry mob!? :pinkiegasp: Shit. NOT GOOD. :raritydespair: *Flaps away while huehuehue-ing softly*

This chapter was wonderful, and I love how you added such an in depth history for the Sarosians. This story is proving to be just, as Dvorix stated, fascinating! And that would be very cool to see if Midnight could shapeshift. But, over all, this story keeps me on edge because I love to hate Octavia, and cant wait to finally see her give up, and the Sarosian history pretty much did the trick... Oh and Dvorix, I just polished my pitchfork so maybe ShadowWeaver can go faster than the speed of light?:rainbowlaugh: So, FANDUBULOUSTASTIC work as always and keep it up!
P.S. When I see a new chapter i'm all like:rainbowderp: ERR MAH GERD! STERIES!:twilightsmile:

How has this story not made the feature box!? its amazing! And only 13 likes!? what the eternal and ever-so-majestic fuck!?

Comment posted by Deyeaz deleted Jul 12th, 2013

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Well, quite a few bronies aren't really capable of accepting a daily dose of anthro in their reading diet. That, and the fact that this is an OC romance fic kinda makes other readers sort of steer clear of this fic, under the assumption that it would be like those shitty cliched romance fics where the girl falls in the love with the guy, they date, they buck, the end.

I wanted to be able to change that cliched plot device, so that the male character - AKA Midnight Oil - falls in love with Octavia. Not right away, but overtime, the more they hang out.

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I am currently writing the seventh chapter as we speak.

Gotta type fast. (insert Sonic meme here)

Hopefully, this shall quench your hunger if only by a little bit.

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2864709 good god that's hilarious...:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: yes, YES! THOU SHALT WRITITH AND WE BE PLEASETHED WITH THY WORK!!!

Horseshoepin, Horse-Chopin... Clever, clever. I think Midnight's turnaround at the end of the chapter was rather abrupt, but I still liked the rest. And 4,800 bits?!?! Holy shit!

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Women can make a man a millionaire. He just has to be a billionaire first.

As for the turnaround, I know it was out of the blue, but if I just oriented intimate interaction with just him and Vinyl, then it would just be an OC x Vinyl fic rather than the OC x Octavia fic everyone was promised.

Now that I think of it, I may need to get a prereader who is devoted to the story and can point me the way.

Love triangles are best triangles. Triangle's a weird ass word.

Please sir, the updates must come sooner,( not to seem unappreciative of your hard work), But I do finish each chapter rather quickly. :raritywink: great chapter though! I despise Octavia, but i'm happy to see Vinyl opening up,(And perhaps later smitten) with Midnight.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I'm really liking it so far. Bravo my friend I hope you write more.:twilightsmile:

i love the story and its nice to read more on the Sarosians thank you.

I just read the first chapter, From what i can tell... This is under-rated.:rainbowkiss:

this story is so under rated it deserves to be on the featured list.Not only dose it display how racial segregation can be difficult on people,but also on how not to judge people on appearance alone. There are some really great story aspects to this fic. All in all I am quiet impressed on the story quality,and I will defiantly favorite this story.

ShadowWeaver... WHAT IS THIS?!?! Almost a month without update???:flutterrage: I feel... sad. I realy like this story, and now its never updating... Why do this to your readers? WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME SHADOWWEAVER?????????:fluttercry::fluttercry:

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Chill out, bro.

I'm re-editing the eighth chapter so that Midnight's fight doesn't look so OP anymore. :3

Try and understand: THIS GAME....

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IS FREAKING ADDICTING.

That, and I'm taking like 3 AP classes, and two of them are hard as hell.

“Are you seriously () that Morgan Freemane documentary about the penguins again?”

Perhaps you should explain what he's doing with the Morgan Freemane documentary?

Also, despite the wait, this chapter has been thoroughly enjoyed.:pinkiesmile:

Seriously, the back story is just amazing. I might have to steal it for my own head cannon. :trollestia:

This is really, really good. I want even more of it, like, right now. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you for catching that, just fixed that now.

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Glad you're wanting more, man! :pinkiesmile:

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My only nitpick is that it kinda needs a dark tag, for all the racism in it and such.

Hey, i'm in AP too! Math and Biology. I hate both of the teachers.

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Hmmm... good idea, mate.:ajsmug:

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AP Lang, AP Physics, and AP US History for me. They're fun, but they're balls-off-the-walls hard :facehoof:

WHY HAS IT BEEN SUCH A LONG TIME?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? WHYYYYY!!! (IK the reasons were already given in the authors notes.):raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair:

I've been reading this story for some time and I got to say that I'm glad that it came back.

"I'm not surprised you have a crush on the likes of him. You can never really do any better, you know."

Vinyl must have crazy respect for Octavia, cuz i'da decked her so fuckin' hard she'd be singin' disney songs.

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Agreed. I'll explain more in later chapters to come, yet it's fan-canon that Octavia and Vinyl are the best of friends. That's all I will really say for now. But hey, I hope you liked this chapter, my friend. :pinkiesmile:

Glad to see this story again. The FMA reference and the Scotch crush were a very nice detail.

“You don’t have to attend the dinner plans with Frédéric if you want to,”

Guessing it's meant o be "it you don't want to," ?

Otherwise nice chapter, always have been a bit of a fan towards the idea of "Character X acts like a total jackass/idiot in certain situations, but is actually a decent person that only does that for certain reasons."

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