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Zytharros


Let the child inside alive. Leave all who would slay them far behind.

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I might like to see another fic like this in the form of Mrs. Cake observing her son since much like fathers seem to have a special bond with their daugthers mothers seem to have a special bond with their sons. :eeyup:

Regardless you have a way with words. I'm always jealous of those who can write fanfics that feel like the dialogue of a great play. Few people have such a talent to write so well. You should feel proud. :pinkiesmile:

'Without my seed, there would be no child. She would still be a lone egg among millions, given no destination but into the garbage dump once a month, like so many of her potential brothers and sisters.'
I am twelve and what is this?
- Weatherstorm

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If I wanted it to be well-done, I'd have to use Big Mac and go the other way, from son to mom. I doubt I'd be able to express those emotions accurately enough to write them the other way around. I might try it, though.

Love it. Quite touching indeed.

After all, you can’t make a gold ring without a hot flame.

So true. So very true.

Last I checked there is nothing creepy about watching your baby sleep.

Pumpkin wasn't floating her first night back I don't think, or the crib would have had a top by one month later when Pinkie Pie foal-sat... or at least their would have been a butterfly pegasus net handy, right?

Other than maybe setting it post Baby Cakes I like this story. You were brave to include the political and religious elements, and I hope that even people who strongly disagree with those points will respect you for giving him strong convictions.

This is amazing! The tiny invisible ninjas are cutting onions!

Hey, if it has not been done already, I want to write a fic where Mrs. Cake has the similar thoughts about her son as her husband had about his daughter. Could you preread it afterwards? :3

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"Regardless you have a way with words. I'm always jealous of those who can write fanfics that feel like the dialogue of a great play. Few people have such a talent to write so well. You should feel proud."

- What'chu mean?! YOUR stories are beautifully written and have me crying onions, too!

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