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Rainbow Dash's father is dying in hospital. All Twilight can do is watch and offer some comforting words.

Words are powerful things. They can hurt, and they can heal; you just have to know the right ones. But when somepony loses their father, what are the right ones?

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WWWWWWWWWWEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡

Dat was amazin'

Who dares down vote this?! Regardless, this story has my approval.

Aww, this story reminded me of my grandfather who I've never met, but he died from cancer. And I never even got to say goodbye.

This was one of the best sad stories I have ever read. Good job!

This has a beautiful ending, great job. :) Sad, tho.

I have been on both sides of this equation.


March 2012 I sat with my best friend in silence, my hand on her shoulder...she had just lost her dad.

November 2014 my best friend sat with me in slince while I cried, patting my back...I had just lost my uncle.

In both situations there were no words spoken. They weren't needed. Just the comforting presence of our friend was more than enough to make everything better.

In times of trouble, words of comfort can be a soothing balm for the weary soul. Like a soft whisper in a bustling day, they remind us that we're not alone, that each of us shares in the universal experience of struggle and solace. Consider this gentle phrase: "You're surrounded by love, even on your darkest days." It's brief, with only 55 characters, much like using a contador de palabras to measure the length of a text, but in its brevity lies its power—a small collection of words that can carry immense weight and warmth.

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