Something falls from the sky. Twilight and the other element bearers go forth to find out what it is. This will be a discovery that will open the eyes of Twilight and her friends and alert her to the danger that approaches.
Track and a 4.5 star my good man. At least for now...
Some minor punctuation errors but overall, I like.
>>224728224728 Thank you very much, your story is a favourite of mine.
I would like feed back :/
But meh. Ponies.