Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo go on another crusade to get their cutie marks after a failed attempt of gaining a cutie mark in making candy. This time the want to enlist the help of Vinyl Scratch, but also get some unexpected help from Octavia.
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2736191 it's been a while since i have made an attempt to write anything xD and 'im out of school for nearly a year and a half now so i haven't kept an eye on punctuation sadly but i will make future fics better in every way i can :D and now you got t to see the ending :)
I must say, this was really enjoyable.
I had luck when I found you on fimfiction
If you write like this on your "masterpiece" as you called it, I will totally love it!
2736341 i will actually try to write the masterpiece better :D but this may end up in that story i'm thinking about it
2736354
You know?
I think I will completely fall in love with your channel and stories!
Very enjoyable and we'll written!
Thank you all so far :) oh and I just noticed this story is on the front page o.o uhm.. well then
D'aww! Sweetie Belle got her cutie mark!
This is a very cute story. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!
2736626 :) I was actually worried that people would be mad at me for giving her her cutie mark and not the others :/ but you raised my hopes thanks
Wow.... For your first story i gotta say.....
IT WAS GREAT!!! It totally flowed and everything made great sense! You should continue the story 
3064119 I kinda am. What I'm going to do is do a fanfic for applebloom and scootaloo. Also this fic is going to be incorporated into the chapter fic I'm not going to publish till its done and perfect or it will be incorperated into the other chapter story depending on how I decide to end the current one. I will say AB's and Scootaloo's cutie mark story will also be incorperated into future chapter fics that I'm currently thinking up. Sorry for the book of a comment ;)
3064820 I am glad! Its OK that its long
Cute story .
