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A year after the "Want it, Need it" incident, Twilight has finally managed to move on from the embarrassment. She doesn't even care that Big Mac has Smarty Pants anymore. There are times to let go of old toys.
Unfortunately, some toys just won't stay put away...
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Full credit for this idea goes to one Mr. Tom Garrity.
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what happened to TD
Oh my. That was... Huh.
Lemme have a few to figure out my thoughts, yeah?
~Skeeter The Lurker
2759254 TD? This has nothing to do with that. I hope to have the next Wanderings chapter out by this weekend, though.
2759268 YEAH!!
Wow that was pretty creepy...
Well, that was certainly a twist on the whole "possessed doll" genre of horror. I do like the fact that the gore is minimal and the real terror comes from atmosphere rather than blood and guts.
Of course, I am wondering something, did you watch any particular movie from that genre? I ask only because this sounds somewhat similar to an old 90's horror flick called Pinocchio's Revenge. Well, kind of. Still, fantastic work overall.
2759301 Well, I've seen all of the Child's Play movies. And yes, I have seen Pinocchio's Revenge.
... I feaking hated it. It was one of the worst movies I've ever seen. I did like how it was kind of implied that the girl was the one doing it instead of the doll (despite how utterly implausible that is) but man, it was a terrible film. The Chucky films are better, even though the only remotely good ones are 1 and 4.
2759309 I'll admit that it's a terrible movie, but yeah, I also think that it's one of those films that could do the route of Last House on The Left or I Spit On Your Grave, ya know, where the remake is somewhat better.
And I'll agree that the Chucky films are somewhat better, but personally, I always enjoyed the Puppet Master films as well. That, and the Demonic Toys films. Always wanted to see Chucky vs Blade.
And if you want to really rot your brain on a abd horror movie, look for one called Mummy Maniac. It's based on an actual killer, and I think the creators were trying to insult the killer so he would show himself. That's the only reason I can give as to why that movie is so bad.
2759340 Oof, yeah, I saw the original Puppet Master as well.
... yawn.
It could have been interesting. I liked the main theme and Blade was pretty cool, but it just dragged on and nothing really happened on top of the fact that the filmmakers are trying to convince me that anybody but Blade is the least bit threatening.
I think . . . I think I'm going to go mix some coffee with a liter of soda and a five hour energy drink with a splash of Red Bull. Then I'll need to figure out how to see in the dark and never close my eyes again.
2759355 Eh, to each their own. Personally, I'd take the first five Puppet Masters and all of the Chucky flicks over some of the crap they have now.
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2759392 I do like the Chucky films. I own Bride of Chucky because it's just such a fun movie.
2759401 Sorry, but whatever you tried to show me didn't make it through.
2759427 Curses...
2759404
Same here, although I do think "Seed" went a bit overboard with the jokes and the like. I would say I'm interested in the remake, but they're just going to CGI the 
out of it.
2759444 They've actually confirmed that Chucky will remain anamatronic.
2759449 Fantastic! That's the best news I've had all week!
Good god, that ending...
And am I the only one who heard Tara Strong voicing Smarty Pants?
2759429 Fret not, I used what little magic I possess and googled it. Needless to say I was frightened by what turned up.
Yeesh, this story frightened me quite a bit, always had a phobia of dolls. Liked it either way, pretty suspenseful.
my reaction to this story
this is me entering the story
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this is me while reading it
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this is me upon reaching the end
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I had chills reading this...but then...i'm unnerved by any inanimate object that displays signs of sentience
Wasn't as Gory as I thought. I was expecting something like 'Cupcakes' where Smarty Pants decides to kill Twilight slowly and painfully. Thankfully it wasn't.
2759829 *brofist*
Me after reading this:
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Woah, Toy Story just got real...
BW strikes again.
That was... disturbing... Good job.
all i can say is
2761216 what does that mean?
2761229
sorry that was the best emote i could use, i mean nothing by it, i just didn't get the feeling i was expecting from the comments,
2761249 And what were you expecting and what did you feel?
2761269
i was expecting to feel unsettled or creeped out, but it was more, well when it got to the high point it kind of jumped off the cliff and slid in a different direction, normally i love your stories, but this was kind of flat to me, i didn't give it a thumbs down, it was still good, but i'm just in the middle about it
2761290 Oh. Well, what felt wrong? I am always looking to improve and I would be happy to re-write flat sections to make them creepier.
2761316
well it wasn't flat, sorry bad choice of wording, it built up just perfectly, but it didn't seem to follow through to me, it's like i hit a wall when it jumped to rarity coming over. i was expecting like a tea party with owlious and spike's corpse or something like that where it's more mentally messed up, so it's something to add not change, what you have is really great, but it needs something added
Bbuuuuuut don't take what i say to heart, you're still hundred times the writer i am so yeah
For some odd reason I couldn't help but read Smarty Pant's lines while thinking of HAL9000 from A Space Odyssey, especially with the line "I'm sorry, Twilight. I'm afraid I can't let you do that."
2761405 Well, obviously that line was a direct reference.
2761347 Okay, I made some additions to the end. Thoughts?
2761431
YES! much better, i enjoyed that a lot more,
2761479 Excellent.
Hm... The additions to the ending were... Uncomfortable. In agood way. Nice job.
I couldn't help but think of this fic when reading this, which was written by a completely unidentified but obviously dashingly handsome author.
Also, Smarty Pants is a badass.
Yes, this is awesome.
Also bonus points for no Twilicorn.
2761712 I don't do Twilicorn. I'm reserving judgement on it in terms of the show itself, but I don't think I'll ever put it in my fics unless they do something really awesome with it.
this is another reason why I had no childhood dolls.