Twilight and Pinkie see each other the same day every week at the same bench on Townsquare. But one day Pinkie Pie started feeling weird, she had never felt something like this and it only happens when Twilight is around.
What would she do? Would she take the risk and tell her friend about her feelings? or, would she keep everything as it is and try to hide her thoughts about her?
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Just a quick note guys. This is my first time writting a fanfiction ever so expect some mistakes.
Chapters (8)
You have an interesting story idea here but it needs a serious rewrite. There's a lot of grammar errors. Though seeing you use "Ajam" and "aja" make me think that English might not be your first language because in English the j's would be h's ("aha"). I would suggest finding a proof reader/ editor to help correct the language. Hope this doesn't sound harsh.
2720232 Well you got that right. Yeah English is not my first language, it's actually spanish. Guess I didn't hide it well. I actually appreciate your comment, although I would like if you tell me an example of a grammar error I made. Thanks
Awesome!
Well, it must be a very important book for Twilight to rage like that... Great story more plz :D
Aww ! That was so cute!
D'awww
cute!
I love this story so far because its just one of the stories I can get red faced while reading.
i think she tries to get a replacement for the book.
For some reason I'm not getting notified when this updates
Good chapter, pinkie would do all of that for a book. Can't wait to see where this goes.
hah, called it
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yeah i ddin't get it either, but i saw it in the Feed.
Although there were a lot of grammar errors it was still readable. Great work :D
SO it is interesting to see the other side of the Diary story, but this one still needs a lot of grammar work. And it is missing words in some places.
So fluffy! I really liked this, i love the details and how descriptive it was. This was a wonderful story. Brohoof to you~
MOAR!
Also I know of a few artists on deviantart that can help but you have to pay them for commissions. I can try and dig them up if you would like?
Yes moar plz
Awesome sauce
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2794810 Really? Awesome! Well, I'm kind of low on bits and cant afford paying someone right now, but if you happen to know someone who just like to draw and would like to make a cover that would be awesome
I don't really know anyone who is free this person might be able to do a request though: lekadema 2796491
2796491 If i had a drawing tablet I would do it but since i dont have the money right now i cant. Sorry
keep going, keep going! this is a pretty good story! must keep reading!!!
cool!
i know this is random, but did you see Equestria Girls?? it was awesome! its my fave movie! 
2817807 Random indeed
I haven't seen it. No movie theaters near are showin it and I'm not going to drive 3hours to watch an hour long movie and the cam rips look awful
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Well i was really excited to see EQG and since i live in england, it wasent airing in england. I was like: WHAT!? I was quite sad that i'd have to wait 2 months just for A movie D: Knowlage is an evil thing. So i just kept looking for it on youtube. eventually i found it.
Me happy!
2818251 I really want to see it too, but I want to do it with the highest quality posibble. Just one question... Derpy... is she around?
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YESH! She was in theer twice do you want me to spoil for you and tell where she is?
MOAR!
But I hope the other story updates soon...
2818280 Here is Equestria Girls 720p http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hmh6pQI2bhw
I love it!
What is so hard about writing 'It's'
Seriously whenever I see is instead of it's I'm reminded of the heavy from tf2.
2846442 that does happens a lot in the earlier chapters, which I have not got around to correcting for him yet. When I am done with the cover art for him I will move on to those so he can update them.
Hope that helps.
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Yay we worked up to this moment!
AWESOME!
cant wait 4 next chapter
It was a great chapter but the only problem was that I think "okie dokie lokie" was a bit overused.
This story's dead ain't it?
I really like this story! But you might want to come back and edit it, because some of it gets really confusing. For example, you say: This important is very important to me. I'm just sitting there like wut
Awesome story though, keep it up!
Just again with the spelling errors, sorry. I also noticed you never put a comma or any punctuation after someone speaks and you might want to fix that. (You don't have to this is your story not mine sorry I'm criticizing you so much)
Another great chapter! The grammar and paragraphing is improved, and I think that the cover art is great! The only thing I have to say (because I'm such a picky critic) is that usually thoughts are put in italics, so sometimes I had to look twice to see if it was a thought, or something being said out loud. Awesome work so far and I can't wait for the next chapter! Love how you're putting Spike in the story
2720241 If it makes you feel any better, you have a better grasp on english than some of the native speakers I've seen on this site. And this isn't bad for a first-time fic. I can't offer my help at the moment, but I would suggest getting an editor and a proofreader.
join this group and add your story. You may be able to find a decent pair to help you out there.