Sweetie Belle is a normal Cutie Mark Crusader who lives a normal life in Ponyville. But when a hot chocolate advertisement gives her the craving, she sets off in search for the ingredients of hot chocolate. This story is packed with humor, mysteries, epic battles memes, and marshmallows!
Author's Note: Please give me ideas and criticizations so that I can continue my work with a better story.
LATEST EDIT: Chapter 1 edited of many grammar errors, plot progression, and some more humor.
Chapters (2)
Reminds me of one of the Derpy fan-fics I read on DeviantART sometime ago about Derpy and Ditzy going off to the Dragon land to find pieces for a toaster so they could have breakfast and continue on with every day life.
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Yeah, I kind of noticed. But doesn't have the same turns, luckily.
I'm detecting a large amount of win in this part of fimfiction.
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Thanks!
I swear, this is going to be FUNNY!!
My meme side is screaming ME GUSTA at Applebloom spending too much time with Pinkie Pie as it seems she's being taught to break the 4th wall and steal our memes My Cupcakes PTSD was also acting up once again because of Applebloom's scaring Luna with the ketchup and smile. Over all :ME GUSTA:
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Thanks! I would love ideas on more of Applebloom's meme nonsense!
This was SO RANDOM!!
Like Pinkie Pie random!
NOW IF ONLY I HAD A :ME GUSTA: PIC FOR THIS
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Oops, sorry if I had published chapter 2 with some errors! I promise I'll attend to them when i find time!
