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ShadowFall


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"Princess, why have you called for me so...um..."

"Urgently? Twilight, creatures of all sorts of strange and mythical power have started to find Equestria their home. But, ponies may panic due to their...appearances. And the creatures could too if they are disturbed. Twilight, you must record and study each of them. Protecting them is also a must. Who knows what they could do if they're angered."

"Wow...this is all a little sudden."

"Come, I'll discuss it to you."

(Cover Art goes to BlackChaos666)

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Comments ( 60 )

Shouldn't Giratina have no problem with the Mane Six?
I mean it's legendary and Psuedo-Legendaries(I.E Garchomp,Metagross etc.)
have shown being able to kill humans and ponies VERY easily,let alone a legendary which was considered by some the embodiment of anti-matter, a being able to stand on equal grounds with the embodiments of Time and Space respectively.
Though unless they're "weaker spawn of the All-father" thing,which even then is giving them too much credit ,go read what Pokemon with rock smash could do to human flesh.
Though the writing is decent and I like the idea,it's in no way offensive so you get a like.

2716967 You must remember that Giratina had no intention to kill Flutter's friends. It was trying to defend the other Giratina at the same time as not causing harm to Fluttershy's friends.

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The thing is though,why would it be harmed if it can stand on equal grounds with TIME or SPACE.Unless we're going on pure hyperbole,I don't see a buck from either Rainbow or AJ bother him too much, unless it was lethally injured or too tired.
But do you mind explaining what were those Giratina?
I mean there can be only one embodiment or protector/owner of the distortion world as the mythology said that it was banished there due to excessive violence(which many theorize it's due to going overboard with protecting the ballance)

2717224 Hmm...I saw Lugia make offspring in the anime. Plus, more than one Legendary dog exists. Possibilities Possibilities.

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"Legendaries dog"XD
For some reason I always disliked the show(yeah sue me) it gets too inconsistent and the pacing is all over the place,nevermind the Bull-meter goes way too high at times.
I mean there is a lot of lore and the Legendaries have mostly a "theme" of being "embodiments" or guardians of certain elements.
Lugia is legendary due to it's power and it was implied to have some role in Ballance of the world.
Why should godlike beings should be allowed
have offspring if they can live near forever due to their roles being too important to be passed on or being a race,nevermind the fact that overpopula-
GAH! Too much thinking forward -_-

2717272 But aside those, seeing you are a pokemon fan, did my fiction appeal to you?

This fic is AMAZING! And it has potential to be a full story. I know you said that you made this to influence other Fimfic writers to write short collabs like this in their own way, BUT you should really continue this; it was exciting to read, you got the characters' personalities write, the plot was pretty good, and... well... the story itself was great! I hope you decide to continue it. Still feels like that there is more to come in the pot.

Anyway, I just have to ask this; is Mew considered to be a "Lesser" legendary pokemon? I just have to ask...

the solution is simple: all they (all the mares and females in the planet) have to do is take in the D.

2718418 Mew is the ancestor of all Pokemon (exept a few others) and it practically has the best move pool in the entire game. You tell me.

(No. New is not lesser. In fact, it is a distribution pokemon, the most overpowered ones that can only be aquired by events and cheats.)

oh! How about Luna meeting Dioxis on the moon, that could explain how she passed the time up there.

2719623 Wow. That really is not a bad idea.

Hey! Just an idea, maybe Luna could also meet Darkrai and Cresselia! Or maybe Rainbow could meet Latios and Latias, they are supposedly able to fly as fast as a jet :rainbowderp: yes Rainbow, you're not the only speed demon in the sky.
It'd be cool if Mewtwo met Twilight Sparkle and had a serious discussion about the meaning of life :twilightsmile:
I could see Luna and Celestia having a pokemon battle with Lugia and Ho-oh respectively :trollestia: :lunafunhasbeendoubled:
This is just such a cool idea! I'd love to be a part of this! I'm new so just tell me how and I'll get to writing!

2720725 Okay. If you have a very good idea, please send me a message about the plot. Beginning to end please. Also, a battle scene should be incorporated to show the pokemons move pool. A good morale of the story should be included.

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Um....:twilightblush: I'm new here. I don't know how. Like, do you want an email or what?

2726394 Just message me on FiMFiction. Do you know how to do that?

2727719 On my profile, there will be a bar with an envelope symbol. Click that.

isn't clefa, clefairy, and clefable spost to be from the moon? great story:heart: please continue :twilightsmile:

I would like to see one where Pinkie is the daughter of Palkia. (Palkia is a female in the story, and this Pinkie's mother.)
My idea is that pinkie is near-death, and being attacked by a Hydra. However, just before she's killed, Palkia appears and goes all-out Mama Bear on the poor hydra.

If that's okay...

i did and you were very clever with how it was worded, also do you accept suggestions for what other legendary pokemon to use? if so i may have some ideas. as with anyone else who reads it.

3019484 Yes my good sir, I do. What do you have in mind?

3019826 I was personallly thinking something along the lines of darkrai meeting Luna, they both have dream based powers. Darkrai can be looking for enjoyment in ponies dreams and unintentionally ruining them, but it meets Luna who nullifies his nightmare ability and comforts the pokemon understanding how it feels when it seems no one likes you.

rough idea i know but i think you could make it work

3019969 Hmm...i also think this could lead to the transformation of Nightmare Moon somehow...

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maybe, like i said rough idea, but i think you could make it work

3020013 Maybe...oh, and a new challenge was added in the author's notes. Plus, new battle music was added to the story.

Awesomeness! :rainbowkiss: Only mistake:

IMMEDIATE DOOM IS UMONG YOU!

That should say "among". :twilightsmile: But other than that, brilliant. I look forward to more!

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What happened to my idea with Luna, Darkrai, and Cresselia? :applecry: Didn't you get my message? Remember? :fluttershyouch:

3022766yes yes yes. I got your message, but this idea has been brewing for a while.

A lying contest between Reshiram and Applejack? (who would lose first, since both deal with truth/honesty)

Comment posted by StrigidaeFan deleted Dec 5th, 2018

Was I notified of this story?

Hmmmm

Meh

:twilightsmile:

Here are my ideas
- a horde of durant Zerg rush the palace and ruins blue blood chamber
-tyrantrum rampage. (Also fluttershy can't do jackshit to quell it's rage)
Celestia encounter races and realize how much of a weakling she is
-yveltal rampage
Groudon decides to troll equestria (by keeping it a sunny day and managing to stop luna from raising the moon.)

Regirock used AncientPower (glowing stones) and Stone Edge (rock spears), Registeel used Flash Cannon (light beam) and Zap Cannon (black lightning ball), Regice used Ice Beam (blue lighning bolt), all 3 of them together used Hyper Beam, and I believe Regigigas used Crush Grip.

3565557 Great job! You win! And for that, you get a limited time offer of 500 Pokedollars to purchase this magic creature!

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YAY I'm gonna have a badass water dragon when he evolves! :3

Oh! Me!! :pinkiehappy: Yveltal used oblivion wing (energy suck beam), hurricane I guess (wind that scraped them on the walls) and sky attack (gold, glow attack) and Xerneas used moonblast (pink ball), geomancy (horn glow thing), and heal pulse (healed Yveltal). Zygarde used....:derpyderp1: um, dragon pulse (draconic fire), extremespeed (his...extreme speed), land's wrath (pillar thing), and.....dragon breath (colorful ray)? That's my best guess

Then why did you Yveltal be the Tree of Harmony and not Xerneas?

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I think Zygarde used Dragon Pulse, not Dragonbreath in the colorful ray.. It's gen 6 animation is exactly what the attack in the story describes. The Draconic fire might have been Outrage since it wasn't a beam, it was Zygarde repeatedly slamming Celestia while cloaked in the fire.

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Both of them together became the Tree.

3697238 Good point, I must've overlooked that part :twilightblush: I mean, I always love reading these! You expect them to be stupid, poorly written, and cheesy, but these stories are quite the opposite! I can always imagine the scenes and fights perfectly!

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DING DING DING DING.

You can advance another floor in Clemont's gym!

3698928 (not to you ShadowFall) :flutterrage: FREAKING GAMESHOW!!!!!

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"Horsefeathers!", Luna shouted and fired a bolt of magic from her horn at the Being of Death. It anticipated it, and amazingly turned pitch black and molded into the wall, completely vanishing.

You guys forgot one. Phantom Force.

So...no going up a floor for you.

i liked Xerneas very much because of its beauuuuuuuuuuuutiful horns and its x-shaped pupils. :twilightblush: :pinkiehappy:

"I am Regigigas: the King of Kings. Look on my stats, ye Mighty, and despair!”

6256015 Then look at my ability then suddenly want to throw me into the trash can.

Isn't there only one Giratina?

7011315 There's another Lugia.

I just wanted to experiment.

7011315 yeah and he could sometimes talk but just go with it for now

2957406 that would explain so many things about pinkie

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