A mysterious Unicorn makes a portal to the Mojave Wasteland, the balance of power in the Mojave is slowly shifting to an unknown force.
A power even stronger than Mr. House, even stronger than the NCR or Caesar's Legion. Factions from all over are being wiped out, there was no one to stop this threat.
The Wasteland would need an army.
Or a trigger happy mailman and an ex-unicorn with magic.
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This is just a side project for a friend and to keep my writing skills(like I have any) sharp until I can figure out how the hell I'm going to finish the new chapter of Why Rainbows Make Me Cry.
Chapters (5)
My opinion is so far neutral. My only nitpick is that Twilight has a-INT score of 17 which I'm fairly certain would put her in omnipotent levels, considering that level 10 INT are usually insanely smart scientist. On the other hand it would balance the lack of skills she has considering just how alien the wasteland would be to her.
2721907 fixed, I was sort of drunk when I wrote that part.
It seems very good so far. I can't wait to read more, though I have to. Hope to hear more from you!
So, instead of 2 primary factions, now we have 3. Should be interesting. Caesar is going to be a little pissed when he gets word on what happened at Cottonwood and I can't wait to see what happens.
good enough
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pfffft drunk man oh man hehe you seem pretty sober in writing this but man you should have SEEN! the shit i wrote when i was tippsy writing was like "then she um i mena he wiat what?" that's how i write when drunk to the um dunno what ever! pinkie has some hard cider and well you can probably see where this is going no need to explain bye!!!
ah sombra my friend tis been a long time has it not? these 'humans' are like puddy in your hand's carry on this is quite amusing
hehe punching bag
hehehe
LOL, loved the last line there.
2754337 I rewrote a lot of it before posting.
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Hmm, one could not tell wether or not one has rewritten the chapter or not keep the status up my friend!
2721907 in regards to this id actually put her at a 11-12 realistically
and why higher then 10 realistically?
magic
magic solves everything
Well to be honest I don't know how I got here or why and the story has a lot of spelling mistakes and is a bit too fast paced but screw it, I'm loving it! And I have no idea why!
2785230 Can you please point out a few mistakes? I don't have an editor or proofreader, and this is really just for practice while I sort out my writer's block for my other story.
Also your profile pic and comment just match perfectly
2785669 Well it's mostly just a few minor ones, nothing major and otherwise it's pretty awesome.
Also, thanks!
this is good but not as good as other crossovers i have seen
So this is what you have been doing instead of why rainbows make me cry... I really cant say I'm disappointed so continue onward.
2847272 Sorry, but my writer's block is even worse than I thought...
This took me, like forever to work around the "Someone died" thing in this chapter!
My brain feels like shit
cliffhangers... cliffhangers everywhere....
2849270 i try to annoy
2850385 what next Fluttershy going to an indie game name Fort Zombie
2853057 I dunno -_-' I have no idea what I'm doing
2927285 I was going for a charismatic, normal kind of guy, good with people, makes mistakes, and is not afraid to point them out. Although that needed a villianous sort of side, so he's evil that's good with people, he's gonna be a tyrant when he gets enough power.
2927285 Sombra, being a shitty villain without any real backstory or dialogue I guess you can be a bit lenient on his personality
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Please continue this story, I have really enjoyed it so far.
How many of them are brainwashed?
I thought:
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What are you talking about? Of course he had dialogue!
Also is this still in progress? Or is it just going to sit on Hiatus until you decided to Cancel it?
This story is good. Wonder what happens next.
2723128 you also turned Doc Mitchell into Doc Michelle, creating the first sex change to be seen in New Vegas. But I respect his/her life choices.
I didn't think it was possible to have an INT stat higher than 10. Then again... Twi broke the Vigor-meter or whatever the name is.
Hope that this won't end up like the DUST mod...
Welp this is dead as fuck