The Mane Six discover an injured mare beside the Ponyville river in the dead of winter. Clinging to life, she is carted to hospital to recover. However, all is not what it seems. Nopony recognizes the mare, and more and more mysteries begin to appear as to who she is, where she came from, and why...
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Intriguing.
Interresting story so far, curious to see more.
This an incredibly fascinating story. Riveting, really. I'll be interested to see where you go with this.
As an aside, the use of cub in reference to Spike threw me for a loop. When I think of cubs, bears, big cats, and sharks are what come to mind. Dragonling is usually what I think in reference to young dragons.
Can't wait
You need to submit this to Equestria Daily.
Loved it, LOVED IT
This chapter was Amazing!!
But the cover picture is so...creepy
OH, I DON'T CARE I'M ECSTATIC WITH *cough* with how this chapter went.
I hope and pray for a new chapter soon
I demand another!
Loved it. But damn, way to make Rarity a bitch.
I'm REALLY bad at giving suggestions
But I'd be interested in what other people suggest
And I'm loving this story so far
I think your doing a great job with the twists and turns
Wow, I certainly didn't see that one coming! I figured they'd have a great battle over the Ever Free Forest and that'd be the end of it. I didn't think she'd come into town and attack everypony but this is much more exciting! I eagerly look forward to seeing what will happen next, hopefully it'll be up soon but if not I'll still be here waiting for the new chapter!
Yes, it's a shame when a story goes practically unnoticed.
But keep on going, I think it's definitely worth a read!
This has been a great read! You are certainly a great author, as others have said, its a shame this story hasn't taken off. You really do have talent for writing characters. However, I'm going to assume that the date of the last chapter update as well as the stated lack of viewership means that this will remain incomplete.. I figured as much going in, but I was intrigued, and now left longing for more