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    At a dull formal party, Soarin' recieves a night he'll never forget with the mare of his dreams.
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  • E Brotherly Bond

    Pipsqueak remembers his most beloved family member... and the tragic feeling of knowing he's gone...
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    Two sisters wage a war of a lyrical kind as they battle for musical dominance.
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  • 127w, 4d
    Absence and Brotherly Bonds Recorded Reading

    First things first, I wanted to apologize for my lack of activity on this site as of late. It's been a hectic few months and I haven't had time to really sit down and go any further in my 'Sour Notes' fanfic than I am already. I could you post the half chapter I have right now but you guys deserve better than that, so I will find the time to really sit down and work on this fanfiction! Just hang time and keep looking out for other great stories. If you look through some of my favorites, they'll be some really good ones to read until I finally get the ball rolling again.

    Secondly, i was messaged by Aramande who showed me a reading he had recorded. His very first recording and he chose my 'Brotherly Bonds' fanfic as his first story. I was really honored to have someone want to do a reading of my story and record it, and so I have to share the link and hopefully get him some more views and comments! Here's the link and I hope you enjoy it!

    1 comments · 186 views
  • 142w, 6d
    Brotherly Bond on EverFree Radio

    Brotherly Bond Review on EverFree Radio

    Had no idea my story got reviewed by the folks of EverFree Radio. They say it was meh.

    Meh to them as well :P.

    Seriously, I'm happy that they took the time to review the story, even if it didn't really wow them. It means something when someone will take a full 20 minutes to describe your work to others, so big thanks to them for doing that!

    0 comments · 76 views
  • 143w, 4d
    DerpyGate 2012 - My Thoughts

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  • 144w, 2d
    'Twilight's Guilty Little Pleasure' Post Comments and Next Project

    I had to wait awhile for it to set in but I think this pretty much sums up how I feel right now...


    I had NO idea that this random short story was gonna be such a hit! Thank you all so much for all the comments and faves and thumbs up! You all effin' rock so much! It made it EqD and folks have been referring it on blogs and forums, it's just amazing! Again, thank you all for everything!

    I had this idea stuck in my head for quite a while and I really wanted to get it on text. It was tough trying to match up Twilight's dancing with the music and I ended up listening to the song countless times to get it as close as I got it. But it's an awesome song, if you haven't listened to it on Youtube or iTunes, go do it now!

    As for my next project, it's currently in the works. The idea popped up literally a day after I posted Twilight's Guilty Little Pleasure on FIMfiction, and I hope it's gonna be another good one. If you want an idea of what to expect, I leave you with this video.

    2 comments · 114 views
  • 147w, 3d
    'Brotherly Bond' Post-Comments and Thanks

    Figured that since it’s been a while since I finished Brotherly Bonds (not counting the extensive typo corrections) I’d figure I’d just give off a few author’s notes and some big thanks to some of the commenters and folks who helped out with this story. It may be a long blog, so if you don’t feel like reading it all, please do see the special thanks section at the very least.

    First off, the inspiration behind this story came from two things. The first one was reading a story called Pipsqueak the Valiant a while back. It was a very well written and very enjoyable story that I would definitely recommend to everyone! If you liked my story, then Pipsqueak the Valiant is sure to entertain you as much as it did me!

    The second one was the low amount of Pipsqueak stories out there on FIMfiction. I think he’s a great character and needs a lot more love! As sad as it is, I don’t think he’ll be making another presence on the show, so fanfiction may be the only way to keep him around in the ponyverse. There are plenty of good ones that feature him, especially DawnFade’s Pirates For A Day and Eternity stories. More recommended reading from yours truly!

    Brotherly Bond was a lot of fun to write and I’m really happy with how it turned out and the amount of praise it received. I didn’t expect so much love and man tears to come from it, and it was a real joy to check my mail when I wake up in the morning or get home from work and see some tracks, faves, and comments in my inbox. If you star’d and/or commented, thank you so much for making my day!

    Now for the critique it’s received. I do appreciate the constructed criticism and will keep the advice in mind when I write future stories. That being said, I went into this story with it all planned out and told myself not to change a thing about the overall plot because of what someone else had said. I do understand the whole ‘not pleasing everyone all of the time’ so I focused on just making a story that I liked, hoping that others would enjoy it too. If at any point in the story you felt let down or disliked it, I do apologize if I wasted your time. However, I’m very happy with how it turned out and it seems that plenty of others feel the same way. Again, if you stuck through it to the end but didn’t like how it turned out, I still thank you for reading!

    One thing I did leave out was music cues. I love reading and writing with some mood-enhancing music in the background, but unless the sad songs from Kingdom Hearts and some tunes from Yu Yu Hakusho are your thing too, then my selection for some scenes may not have suited your tastes. If anyone is interested, I may post the songs I listened to while writing some of the scenes in another blog, because this one is getting long already. I might as well be typing out another story!

    Now for some recognition!


    Your Antagonist (VegaKS03) / Midnight Legend Press – It was awesome getting praise from one of the writers of the story that inspired this one! Really did keep the writing spirit alive and well in me! Thanks for the comments and thank you for your story! Hope I’ll be seeing more from you and your crew!

    Spazkit – Pointing out the whole y’all and ya’ll confusion made me go back and change it up. I’m not too good with dialect other than what I use myself on a daily basis. I think the story looked a lot better after that slight change. Thanks for that!

    Alexstrazsa – Before reading your comment on Equestria Daily, I honestly had no idea that you were the pre-reader before this fic made it onto the site. Your advice really helped me get this story looking better grammatically and in its presentation and it would have never gotten the boost of exposure without you! Thanks for the praise and for getting this story onto EQD!

    Cloudhammer, Equestrian Deadpool, Tonto the Trotter, NecromancerX69 – Some folks who left multiple comments and in some cases, a stream of manly tears! Thanks for all the praise, you all were a big part in making this story worth writing!

    MaverickVox – Thanks for sticking to the story to for as long as you did! I know that the direction it went may not have been to your liking, but your praise and the confidence you had in the story was really awesome! Hope the ending made up for the sudden twist, but if not, I still thank you!

    That’s about it. If you have any questions about the story you’d like answered, do feel free to ask here in the blog comments!

    Next story is on the way. All I can really say that it was inspired by a little song by Incubus called ‘Here In My Room.’ You may already have an idea of what to expect.

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  • ...

Everypony has their secrets. Their own 'guilty pleasures' that they try to hide even from those closest to them. What kind of secret does Twilight Sparkle keep to herself, and can she indulge in it when she has the whole library to herself?

First Published
14th Feb 2012
Last Modified
14th Feb 2012
#1 · 145w, 1d ago · 1 · ·


Oh Twilight, you're such a silly filly :rainbowlaugh:

#2 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

I think I just dropped dead laughing, and now my soul is writing this. :rainbowlaugh:

#3 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

I saw that picture on DeviantART. I'm gonna check this fic out at some point.

#4 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

:facehoof: plot twist win

#5 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

Oh god,  I can't imagine twilight dancing the napoleon dynamite dance.

#6 · 145w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

You should submit this to hasbrO, they may actually make an episode On it, seriously, it's amazing

#7 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

Stars! WOO!

Nothin' left for me~ to give but STARS!

#8 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·


#9 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

Haha, I've had the goofiest grin on my face all the way through this. I actually managed to keep up with it as the song played, which shows that you're a good pacer when it comes to writing, so congrats to you for that. The thought of Twi actually doing this though is totally freaking adorkable!


#10 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·



Something like this MUST be made into an episode.

I'm Serious.

Think about it, its rated everyone and there is a lesson at the end: TRUE friends would accept you for who you are. :twilightsmile:

#11 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·


That ending sold it. :rainbowlaugh:

#12 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

Work of art.

Or maybe work of lols

#13 · 145w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Today, my friends discovered my secret dancing routine. I had been keeping it from them for so long, that I had feared that when they saw just crazy my dancing was, they’d think I was strange and not want to be friends with me anymore.....................

I learned today that while it’s easy to fear what your friends would think of you if they found out your ‘guilty little pleasures,’ your true friends will not only accept it, but maybe even applaud you for it

I can't believe nopony else has noticed this yet. Brony metaphor much?

#14 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

I reading this just before bed and I know its going to invade my dreams. That ought to be fun. Go Twilight! Dance!

#15 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

Twilight's got the moves. She has the moves like Jagger, she has the moves like Jagger, she has the mo-o-o-o-o-oves like Jagger.

#16 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

You sir, are a winner and you may have five mustache spikes!


#18 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

I loved this story. It's pacing was pretty much exactly in time with the music as I read it. 5 stars for you, my good man.

#19 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

WIN. A simple but fun story.

#20 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

Submit this to Hasbro and Equestria Daily. NOW!

#21 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

Take my stars, all of them!

#22 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

so much awesomeness!

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#24 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

The misdirection.

It's just too perfect. :rainbowlaugh:

#25 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·


#26 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

... This is the greatest thing I've ever read. :rainbowlaugh:

#27 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·


If an episode can't be made, at least a Flash video must be done.:pinkiehappy:

#28 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

"I know you can't control yourself any longer

Feel the rhythm of the music getting stronger

Don't you fight it till you've tried it..."

Dance my little ponies! Dance! =^_^=

Well written! It's hard to describe so much continuous action without getting repetitive.

#29 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

Nice.   Happy Valentines/ Hearts and Hooves day everypony!

We are all God, isn't it obvious?

#30 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

Haha :rainbowlaugh: This was a really funny start to my day.

#32 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

:twilightblush:            :moustache: :yay: :pinkiegasp: :rainbowkiss: :raritywink: :ajsmug:

:trollestia: :trollestia: :trollestia: :trollestia: :trollestia:

#33 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

... The "everyone" rating ruined it, at least partially. I still choked when it started..

And then I grinned. This story deserves to be an episode, or a public service announcement, or SOMETHING. Just too damn cute.

#34 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

I don't like random fics, but was really good to read it.

This would be a good script for a future episode easily. :D

#35 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

Ridiculous, hilarious, and a moral anyone in this fandom can appreciate.

I give this fic 5 embarrassed Twilights...


...out of five.

#36 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

I thought it was gunna be clop fic.. Im sad now:trixieshiftright:

#37 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·




"Ruined"? To me, it didn't seem to be trying to make the reader jump to a false conclusion.

#38 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·


The episodes are flash videos.:trollestia: And someone will make this even if I have to hold a gun to their head while they do so.:pinkiecrazy:

#39 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

amazing, funny and the song is incredible thanks for the laugh

#40 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

This was a really entertaining story :heart:. Not what I was expecting, but I liked it a lot :twilightsmile:

#41 · 145w, 1d ago · · ·

Haven't listened to Jamiroquai in ages. Good stuff, although the dancing did go on a while. (I know the song does too, but still.)

Well, nicely written, different, short and sweet; a good idea and well-executed overall. A 4 from me.

...4.5. The song's so darned catchy. Now where'd I put that album...?

#42 · 145w, 23h ago · · ·

oh god, the plot twist :facehoof:

#43 · 145w, 23h ago · · ·

This was great :rainbowlaugh: Very entertaining, very much in the spirit of the show, and just good fun.  The moral at the end was a good one, and honestly I can say it brightened my day just to read it.  The only real 'issue' I noticed with it was an inconsistency with "feet" and "hooves" in here, but that was so miniscule I may as well have not noticed it.  Short, sweet, well-written, funny, and a great premise with a lesson at the end to add to it: be proud because this is more than deserving of 5 stars.

#44 · 145w, 23h ago · · ·

The reply from Celestia... Seriously. :rainbowlaugh:

Have all the stars, you certainly deserve them.

I don't see the reason this couldn't be made into an episode. :twilightsmile:

#45 · 145w, 23h ago · · ·

Great story!!:pinkiehappy:

#46 · 145w, 23h ago · · ·


I meant an unofficial one. Like Magneighto.

#47 · 145w, 23h ago · · ·

More and more fics putting music to go with them. I'm loving this!

Luna doing the conga. . .:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#49 · 145w, 23h ago · · ·

Princess Celestia's reply... Priceless 5/5 good sir :rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

#50 · 145w, 22h ago · · ·

someone should make an episode

for reals

i loved it

that is all


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