Equestria has changed. A lot. Nothing is like it was before. After another chaos crisis, the world became very unhospitable, and pony civilization has been brought to the dust. It has been partially rebuilt, but not at all how it was - how it should be. Extreme injustice, corruption, and no perspectives for a change for better. But still, there is one pony who is trying to make the difference. She wants to bring the world back to what it was in past - before the chaos crisis emerged. But she can't do this by herself. She needs help from the ponies of Equestria, in order to bring back the ways of the old gods, so the world will be joyous again, as it was before; as it should always be. Her name is Luna.
Cover art by nerow94 (deviantART link)
Special thanks to ElectricErger
Okay, what was the point of the prologue? You have us form a connection to Luisa, a nice, strong, well-developed character, but then you just throw her away. I was looking forward to seeing her story, but then "poof", she's gone, and we get Jason the doormat instead.
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Well, the point was to introduce the reader to the world. And don't worry, there will be enough nice, strong, likeable characters in the following chapters (I have ideas for at least a dozen right now). Jason isn't going to be sissy anymore, either
2713541 My respose was going to be that you should do it without her in there, but then I realized that would turn it into an info dump, which is worse. You wrote the prologue too well. You gave too much character development to a throwaway character.
intriguing....just found this is the buried treasures group......go on