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Apple Bloom is dealing with the most horrible thing in her whole life....

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PonyPuffy 2012

PonyPuffy 2012 #1 · Jun 11th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Nice Apple sibling bonding, but Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo would never turn on Apple Bloom like that. I also don't buy Rarity and Rainbow Dash condoning their behavior and basically blaming Apple Bloom for it, Rainbow especially since she was a victim of bullying herself at the CMC,s age.

Acespadez1134

Acespadez1134 #2 · Jun 18th, 2013 · · ·

this is an interesting idea and could go in many directions. I like it.

Ima Silly Pony

Ima Silly Pony #3 · Jun 12th, 2016 · · ·

The Apple sisters' bonding was good, but Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo would never side with the bullies. Rainbow Dash and Rarity would also never abandon Applejack like that. It was also hard to read. Good idea, but the execution was flawed.