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Blindly Lost

When a blind crystal filly named Musical Rose is ejected from a train by her parents, she is found by an odd 'thing' named Zacora, she is taken to someone named Rarity, who she thinks will help her find her parents and will help her find her cutie mark, but when Rarity kicks her to the curb who will this poor filly turn to?

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Spartanpony2424

Spartanpony2424 #1 · Jun 22nd, 2013 · · · the beginning ·

If this is your first story, it was really interesting. But I kept on wanting to stop reading this because of the way you wrote it. I don't know how to explain it. But all I could say is, edit. But don't worry, you did a pretty good job on the plot.

pbennett2018

pbennett2018 #2 · Jun 22nd, 2013 · · · the beginning ·

This is my first story I'm afraid. Terribly sorry for that. I will work on getting all my errors fixed within it I was in a rush and wanted to get the story out.