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    Luna returns on the first Summer Sun Celebration Twilight Sparkle spends in Ponyville, claiming her banishment to be "unlawful". The royal pony sisters come to blows, and commit to a war that distracts Equestria from the real threat.
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  • Thursday
    Trancer Rewrites

    A brief notice to let my adorably quaint fanbase know that I'm going through the first ten or so chapters of The Trancer, reworking them as I go to refocus on this whole theme and tone malarkey I've heard so much about. So, if you feel like your life has been lacking extra blue stripes, why not try rereading a bit, to see what's changed?

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  • 50w, 6d
    Here We Go Again

    Well, there's the latest Trancer chapter over and done with. That took a lot longer than I expected. In other news, I FOUND HIM: Hahatimeforponies' Fimfiction Profile! And now it's time for a free promo by yours truly.

    Go read this nutball and subscribe to his Tumblrs. If you don't, then... well, I won't like you any more. SO THERE.

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  • 57w, 1d
    I've just hit the 100,000 word mark, and...

    That was a lot easier than I expected. Granted, I have no one editing this story, and I know it wanders significantly in the most recent chapters (something I'm hoping to remedy once the ordeal with Chrys is over with), but still! First 100k I've written for any story, ever. Maybe I do have some talent.

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  • 58w, 6d
    Updates and future ideas

    WELL, there you go, my very small number of readers. I've added the first chapter of A Jar Of Dark, hoping it won't disappoint anyone, and added Chapter 11 to The Trancer, which I am sorry for the lack of length this time around.

    Anywho, when I'm done with one of the aforementioned projects, I may start another, if people are still reading. Are you, even? Probably shouldn't ask that. Tis an excuse for trolls to compete amongst each other over who can write more insults into one blog comment.

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  • 60w, 4d
    Side Stories

    To those who are actually kind enough to read these sparse updates I make, I'll be putting up a few side-stories and other assorted things soon enough, to go along with The Trancer, which is still a priority, though with other ideas running around my head, well, you get the idea. Probably.

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Zuri is a Zebra, living on the planet Palosol. Palosol shares its sun with Equestria, the pony-dominated planet. Raised as one of the powerful Sand-Trancers, Zuri can manipulate the world around her via the magic ingrained in her blood.

On a quest for renown, she leaves her home city beneath the sands in search of something that will let her live up to the legacy of her widely-known family. Within hours of leaving home, however, she runs afoul of frontier ponies, and quickly finds herself up to her neck in troubles brought about by their colonization efforts. In short order, she breaks free from their internment, finds friends in a band of oddly loyal mercenaries, sets a young ruler free, and winds up putting herself right in the middle of a sprawling plot that threatens to destabilize the pony colonies and the entire zebra civilization.

Warning: OC-Centric, lots of non-descript murder

First Published
8th Jun 2013
Last Modified
8th Sep 2014

Interesting. You very rarely see a zebra OC. And to set it in a science fiction universe that's a bit of Firefly with Django Unchained with Avatar is unusual but you have made it work. Please continue with this and have a fav

Partly it's getting used to your canon, and partly it's the good characterization, but this fic get exponentially better each chapter.

#3 · 56w, 6d ago · 1 · · 12. The Spirits ·

The plot thickens... Gotta wonder just what form of spanner Chrys is going to be tossing into the works with her unpredictable agenda.

Also, Cyborg Rarity. Me gusta. There's gotta be a story behind that. I can't see her as being the sort to lop off her own legs for black metal replacements.

Comment posted by Ajaxis deleted at 4:08pm on the 20th of June, 2014

This last chapter...

I couldn't help it. I lol'ed. You're doing very well portraying Shade, and all of the other characters are developing nicely. Can't wait to see what happens next!

This is unique, i like it.

Zuri is a badass!

Zuri can't win...

This is amazing

wonderful to see the story still alive and kicking.

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