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Sweetie Belle falls in love with the new colt in town, a colt that most ponies would identify him as the average antisocial gaming nerd. To Sweetie however, he's her Prince Blueblood to Rarity (That is before the Gala). He's the colt that she wanted to have by her side. He is Button Mash.
Cover art by Superrobotrainbowpig on DeviantArt. Inspired by Jan Animations and his tumblr blog, Ask-Thecrusaders.
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This is gonna be sweet. Ah young love.
And just watch within a month this ship will be all the range like with RarityxThunderlane after "Wonderbolt Academy".
2901890 It already happened. Have you not read JanAnimations "AsktheCrusaders" on Tumblr? That's what inspired me to write this
I love jan works, and this fanfic is nice
2902240 I'm talking about the fandom itself.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Can't believe someone already wrote one about Button Mash. :D
Nicely done. It was because of Jan's tumblr that this caught my eye.
I don't want to come off as rude or anything, but I feel the need to point out errors when I see them.
There were some issues throughout the chapter... Mostly grammar when it comes to dialogue. You kept forgetting to include a space after the quotation marks. For instance:
And something that might be able to help you down the road: LINK
I am definitely going to keep an eye on this story and see how you develop the plot along. Keep up the great work!
This is good. Now give me the rest of the story in 10 seconds flat.
amazing more please
Nice! this looks promising and I HAVE LITERALLY been waiting for a fanfic of Button and sweetie to appear, but I have this thing that I only read fanfics that have a considerable amount of words in it, so if you can make this story over 50,000 -100,000 I will gladly read it.
Jan says he´s also been waiting for a Button X SweetieBelle fanfic to appear, As his moderator I´ll try to get him to give this story a short read or two when he´s not busy.
3000759
omg thank you 
Pretty good but kind of rushed. I think you could delve more into the party and hint at the romance in the third chapter.
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3003223 All the same one does not simply rush into romance. It's just as rushed as people accuse the Equestria Girls romance of Flashlight of being.
3003246 Fine I'll admit it. I'm really impatient with building up to the main theme of a story. I always seem just to jump right in with it
*shivers* I hope my younger sister never asks me for advice about guys. Why did I tell her she could ask me about anything
But yeah, like the other said, a bit rushed but good. Try to add more detail, especially if Jan himself might read it!
Also, a month or so ago, I thought of an idea for an idea for a Sweetie×Button I'm going to write with a completely different storyline than this after seeing JanAnimation's videos. I saw this afterwards, just so you know I'm not ripping you off.
3003396 ...fine...but don't rip off of me...i'm watching you
3003459 *clicks follow button* And now I'm watching you too. In the non creepy way
Also in the creepy way though. Beware!
Orright, going a little fast IMHO. But still good! Still good!
2 dislikes. Hmm...I wonder how many people are gonna flip out and hunt those two people down
YES! Go ButtonBelle.
3031610 Me
Hmmm, it's good so far. I've warmed up to the idea of Button Mash and Sweetie Belle together. (I was more of a Rumble/Sweetie Belle kind of guy, but eh. I can have other ships too.)
Though I would've thought Rarity would have been fangirling and squealing when she heard her little sister had a crush.
Probably try and set them up on a date and get her a cute little dress.
Well, looks like you beat me at making a Button Mash x Sweetie Belle fic. I'm lovin this story, please keep it up!
Pipbloom?
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3044453 Why don't you make yours then?
Some scenes look forced but otherwise the fic look good.
I wish they would give her a proper name
I'm liking this story so far but it feels like its moving along way to fast. Or is that just me?
Thank you for being the first author to submit a story to Button Belle!
3044453 you don't know how awesome it is for me to hear that more Button Mash fics are being made
Before you know it there'll be a Button tag for a character instead of an OC
Thanks buddy
3061354 Ah yes I was trying to figure out who they were implying. Guess that means Scootaloo is the only CMC member (in Ponyville anyway) to not have a colt friend.
3062088 They seem more content to write incest fics between her and her son. Something that disgusts me to no end.
3031610 This story deserves a like. But it's going a little to fast. Try and put complication in it, it will make the chapter longer and the story too.
Complication help with love stories and help you fell close to the charters. I give out rating's to finished story's so win its done i will give my rating.
3069158 I feel the same way man.
Who are the three idiots that dislikes this?
When are u gonna post part 4?
if there IS a part four.
when the only two letters scoots said were pi I thought she meant pinkie pie
oh gosh why
3064561 I have to agree with this person I mean you placed him next to Diamond Tiara who would most definitely have made a comment about his "blank flank" to which he would reply with "meh I don't really care about that"
3108681 that's not quite what i was getting at this story is moving along way to quickly and seems a little to cut and dry. guy likes girl, girl likes guy and bam there a couple. i wish it was that easy.
( not trying to be rude just putting my opinion out there )
A Joyboy sounds like a sex toy...
And the next chapter is here
I liked it. Shirt and Sweet. (Ba-Dum pssh)
I think Button's Mom needs a better reason other then "Because I said so".
3209074 what's the big deal? Stop making such a big deal out of it
She doesn't want her son to go on a date because he's too young?
Okay. Seems odd...and kind of an excuse for angst. Button's mom (does she have an official name yet? Come on people, she needs one.) never came across me as doing something like this.
Still, I think this fic is cute.
3210508 A lot of girls I've wanted to go out with in the past have all had over protective parents that don't want their daughters dating, so I plugged that into this story, by switching it from daughter to son. That's the way it goes around here
I'm starting to like this story a bit more now but I waited so long for an update that I had to reread some of it. ( please update a bit quicker )
I love this story!!! I hate buttons mom though -_-
Me want update so kissy wissy's would happen! :D
PLZ BE FASTER WHEN UPLOADING!
