This story is a sequel to My Little Bionicle: Destiny is Magic
Twilight and her friends have been sent to Mane Nui to help the Toa Mata to save the island and the villagers. Meanwhile things are happening in the land of Equestria, Shades are appearing in Ponyville and a strange armor green pony has been seen with the Great and Powerful Trixie. The Order of the makuta have not been seen since the Mane six freed Artimes. And who is this unknown figure seen wondering the Frozen north.
Chapters (21)
Is this a sequel?
Because so far it's good
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More of a continuation of DiM, but this is the next arc in the story.
There's a BIONICLE crossover and no one told me?!?!
I must read the first one so I will understand what's going on. Have this here like while I get catch up!
2674980theirs an entire group!! And I'm the founder
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O.O I have been so blind!
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Trust me there are more of these and I was not the first one to write one of these
I like it so far, BTW will their be any Equestria/Nuian pony shipping?
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OCs only but I will have cannon Nuian, before the retcon that matoran can't date, and MLP cannon. Wait...just checked a future chapter with a possible one. No spoilers and I'm the only one with the access to it but here's a hint
It was Takua who retrieved the gear, not Maku.
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I know but I wanted to change that, it is just my choice. Takua still got it in Cannon in bionicle.
Not bad, wish the chapter was longer though, since I can't get enough of this story! Great job!
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Thanks, I try and keep them just over 3k for a constant and goal for each chapter
Him, I see Spike and Artimisis spending a lot of time together :)
One the other hand good work
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both were monsters but saw their true selves thanks to those around them. Besides I think Spike should hang out with kids more, after all he is a baby dragon.
Wow, I thought that was a great chapter!
Keep up the good chapters!
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Thanks Blaze is one of the main reasons this is better then last story
My guesses to the golden eyed unicorn:
1. Brutaka
2. Takanuva (I'm guessing this one is more likely, look at the pictures of him...unless this golden eye being is a makuta)
3. Lhikan (his eyes are orange but whateves)
3320654 your not the only one that got it right but you are the first one on here that has got, as for your guesses Brutaka was in the sidestory, Takanuva is still Takua, and Lhikan is up in the air. Last half was for others reading this chaos
Quick question. Does the giant robot exist?
3346394 not in this story or any canon that I have written so far, besides I only want to have robots built by matoran hands or hooves as the case may be. I know the mata nui robot was built by the matoran but the matoran/nuians have not built anything that large in my stories.
One Rule of the Internet one should remember is that for any two given franchises, there is a crossover between them in fanart, fanfic, or official release... and I thank God for it. Frequently.
3369519 thank you, writing this story is difficult for both trying to have the bionicle characters act like ponies and interlace both of their histories into a coherent story.
hey coy when is next chapter up
3477376 after season 4 premiere
3477387 okay thanks for the info which means next episode in 9 days HECK YEAH
3488785 I did not say when thought did I Nikola
3488950 no you did not
Why thank you for that comment to a coy. The longer I read this the more I am surprised how well my shades fit into this world. Keep up the good work. If you need help on any new idea's pm me so we can discuss it.
3882437 you are welcome GH and if anything comes to mind you will be the first to know
3882516 oh I forgot to mention my birthday is coming up soon. Just before Valentine's day. I'm turning 19! Wow been doing fanfiction for five years now.
3883913 cool, I have been doing it since I was 13 but did not start posting until july 2010. (note: 20 at the time of posting this.)
Okay nice one there and I finally found what shades can eat! A small pellet of solar and lunar magic in solid form. I call it dusk capsules. Two of these per meal will keep them alive as it recharges the spell keeping them in existence and over time makes them immune to sunlight for an hour added to the ti me they last. Unfortunately this means dessert areas is fatal to them if they don't have any shade around to keep out of the sun. That was obvious there. Anyway looks like it won't be long until goldrax becomes a true toa and nice work with the hellhounds you got them almost exactly the one's in my imagination when I made them. The ones I had were riddled with veins of magma on their body increasing the heat they emmit. But still nice job.
4189833 Welcome dude :) and good idea
Are their any other islands from the matoran universe like Karda Nui and Metru Nui or maybe even Xia?
4192648 There are, right now I know that there are caves with island in them like in normal Bionicle. However stuff like Artahka, Voya Nui, and other Islands are on the surface. Thinking about it more the only ones underground would be Metru Nui, Karda Nui, Karzahni, and Order of Makuta Bases. Also much like in the source Mata Nui is connected to Metru Nui which connects back to the original land explored by the Equestrians. I think Artahka would be above Karzahni since the two are called heaven and hell in passing.
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Will these areas be mentioned or explored in future chapters
4192947 I plan on working on them, Metru fist and then go from there but I don't want to go into detail since it can change as the story is written Metru Nui will stay more or less stay the same as seen in Demon's Tales
This honestly deserves more views. Yes, the grammar and spelling are in desperate need of editing, but the story itself is quite enjoyable.
Also, Lesovikk/Trixie NEEDS to be made a thing.
Just saying.
5417594 thanks, my editor has been busy. I write for enjoyment. And that was the point since the two seems to complete the other. also share this and the other stories with your friends if you want.
According to Greg their is a. Machine that can make more matoran and that most people knew about it
5577935 I know of that but we are dealing with organic and all the known means of reproduction. However this got me thinking in another way, since that is based on humanized versions I will have to change it a bit, plus magic so it is not as strange. The main reason for this is I do plan on at least Jaller and Hahli getting together as well as Hewkii and Macku. Who knows what I may use if I decide to go full romance on Trixie and Lesovikk ship.
5578201 Potential for full romance on TrixiexLesovikk ship? Yes, please!
I don't know why, but I just love that pairing for some reason.
5595072 I will try my best to make it right and not just a baseless ship
5595443 Makes complete sense to me. I have to say, the story as a whole is, in my opinion, very good. The characters are enjoyable, the plot is pretty good, and the story itself is written in such a way so that it is easy for me(I don't know what other readers think) to get into and enjoy. Well done!
Keep up the good work!
5602042 Thanks I like writing it like it is the first time anyone has heard of the two main cannons, that way anyone can pick it up even if they know the lore of the originals.
Island of lost Masks
6161344 who knows something like that may happen in the new book, but I have no clue.
When will the next book be released?
6225859 The bohrok story will be four or five months with Artemis's story happening in the next month or so