♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

isnt this over on fanfiction.net?

im sure it is. Y U NO UPDATE?

This is pretty good, has an almost STALKER feel to it in the second chapter which just makes it awesome! Hope to see more.

>>1121011210

Thanks! I personally have never played any of the STALKER games, although I have read 'Roadside Picnic' I doubt my computer would be able to take Stalker

Anywho, I am sorta going for the 'wasteland'-y feel of post-apocalyptic games, without using any of the pre-created worlds. Nice to see someone pick it up.

>>83538353

Well, I have updated, and the reasons of such massive delay is in the footnotes. Yet again, Sorry 'bout that.

>>74907490

Thanks! Hope you like the new chapter!

let's see where this goes shell we

>>1155611556

I sea what you did there

Luna was awesome in this. She seems to either go from 'Twilight but more reclusive' or 'Pinkie's big sister with gratuitous amounts of Flirt(tm) thrown in'. I like the latter the best, and your depiction of her reinforces that fact.

Also I must inform you that because of this story I am once again plagued by plot bunnies.  

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Not only an update, but an awesome one! Yeah I'm sad its so short, but that cliffhanger was pretty great.

yay gilda! with guns!

Definitely a nice twist, the griffins. I was expecting HLF technicals to be honest.

need... moar

>>2584425844

Yea... I'm not that kind of author. Anyways... I'm gonna go have a chat to my editor, about first drafts and stuff...

that was interesting

I've been waiting for a "conversion to X" where X != pony. I like ring of fire (still waiting for that to finish too!) but I want to hear more about griffons too!

Keep it up!

Why HLF fighting against humans as themselfs??? Or it's just one more way to tell that humanity is ***ing **** and etc. This getting disturbing you know, don't forget what exactly you are IRL.

>>4560945609

Well, the HLF only want to off the griffons and then 'save' the civilians, because they believe that they're being forced into ponification. John wants to find out where that are, then avoid them completely.

interesting

Hope this story is still ongoing, liking it thus far