Everyone assumed Celestia and Luna were immortal, but sadly, this is not the case.
Celestia is standing at her dear sisters death bed, but the emotional toll that was put on her was more than anypony could imagine.
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Thank you, I suck at sad stuffs XD
Immortality is a curse, not a gift. I haven't read this but just by reading the description I can tell you've done a good job, you've chosen a great subject and decided to turn it into a tragic tale. By seeing that there's only two chapters i can tell you've created a story about Celestias feelings and the impact Luna's death has upon equestria. I would like to read this but I'm afraid sad stories aren't my type of story.
2688676 Thank you
I don't like to read sad stories either, so I understand where you're coming from
This was really sweet. I'd have ben really happy with a sequel, showing a slow recovery. Still, it's really good. :)
2731059 Thank you so much for the feedback!
I've been working on something else at the moment, but I will definitely consider making a sequel!
The sequel that was mentioned, about a slow recovery. That would be nice. But. In all honesty, I'd enjoy seeing an alternate ending to the sequel, where celestia gets worse, and drifts farther off, until... Welll you know... No more celestia... If you'd like help with it I'd be glad to help.
2759828 I love that idea! I want to finish up something I had been working on, but I will definitely make a sequel to this in the near future!
2688676 I Totally agree with you, in my headcanon alicorns are longevity not eternal, everything must die as is the circle of life
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I wasn't saying that immortality isn't a thing. Neither am I saying that immortals can't die eventually.
I was saying that immortality is not a thing to be seeked, it's a curse, not a gift. It's not good, it's bad.
Everything has to die eventually, for a reason.
Even Immortals.
I really wanted to like this, but it is simply too bland. Nothing about it really stands out, and the questions it leaves behind unanswered (i.e. all of them) just frustrate matters. Not bad, but not good. I give it a solid no thumbs: meh