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WhatMakesaRainbow

Joined January 2013
34 followers

Stories (4)

  • My name is Buddy
    I take up a new job at bartending. Well...Not really new to me, I've done this before, but this place seems like it'll have a lot more story to it. Guess only time will tell...

    64,221 words · 239 views · 18 likes · 1 dislikes
  • I am Octavia!
    Several different stories throughout Equestria...These are some of them, ad as random as they come.
    1,529 words · 238 views · 5 likes · 0 dislikes
  • and there it sleeps, the creep
    Fluttershy has an awfully scary night in her little home!
    1,601 words · 183 views · 5 likes · 1 dislikes
  • Nights last forever when you're falling
    Rainbow's night of nights is upon her- and Scootaloo's moment comes to.
    3,511 words · 514 views · 18 likes · 14 dislikes

I take up a new job at bartending. Well...Not really new to me, I've done this before, but this place seems like it'll have a lot more story to it. Guess only time will tell...

EDIT:

Uhh...First four chapters are really choppy, but the rest are written recently- when I'm not shit- and are where the story really is. Enjoy!

First Published
2nd Jun 2013
Last Modified
17th Jan 2014

Comments ( 59 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Ok wow this started out great,I like the speed of things,and this is written very well :twilightblush: but don't you think  that you could make the chapters longer ? :trixieshiftright: even just by a tiny bit ?

#2 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2667154

Actually, this IS the slightly extended version. I promise that the chapters will be much longer than this. think of this chapter as...An introduction. Two things though, one thanks for your compliment and criticism. And two...totally digging you picture. Should I make the second chapter now? ^_^

#3 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

I'll like this. Very much. I mean, he's just working at a bar. What could go wrong? :pinkiecrazy:

But, this seems like it will become an excellent story! Keep working on it :twilightsmile:

#4 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

This has some great potential, can't wait to see more!  Also, great to see you writing again, I was wondering when you would get back to it.

#5 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

>>2667631

Thank you very much for the encouragement. Chapter 2 is up and that's where it really gets started. Enjoy!!

#6 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·

I *really* like where this went. Just a good-willed barhorse doing his damnedest to give out "high spirits" so to speak.

The bartender is just a really cool character. Really down to earth. And smart too! "I'm sure if you saw it half full..." :derpyderp1: whoa...

Right when Vinyl was entranced by Octavia kinda got me too. :fluttercry:

Oh, and would hoves play a cello methodically, or effortlessly?

#7 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2668650>>2668650

First off..Thanks for the comment. ^_~ It's nice to know that I wrote some deep stuff in there, I was beginning to fear it was just some...wannabe stuff. The part I thought was the coolest waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaas....

She takes it in for a moment, surely she has to know quite a few names like myself. She then tips her hoof over her hair, like she would if she wore a hat. "Vinyl." She gives me a wink and walks back on the stadium. I don't mind that the gentle music stops for now, and instead the bar is whisked by a subtle conversation. I go across the bar, letting them have their privacy.

I thought that showed a lot of his character. Just a real, down to earth dude. and to answer your question...Methodically? Effortlessly? Neither; confidently.

#8 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Really interesting Story so far, I can't wait to see how it coninues!

#9 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

>>2670457

Thanks for the review! ^_^

You guys gotta continue encouraging the story though, otherwise I'll think it lost it's staying power. ;p

#10 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·

Well this did certainly get interesting :pinkiehappy: but I have to remind you that you just did an act of cruelty that Manny other authors do....a CLIFFHANGER *thunder* :flutterrage: :flutterrage: :fluttershbad: :fluttershysad: …………:pinkiecrazy:

#11 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2670958

Yeah, get used to that. Every chapter of this series is gonna have a cliffhanger. lol

#12 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2670968 ...........:pinkiecrazy: *a sound similar to a cello string that snapped could be heard*

#13 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

>>2670979

Oh boy. Relax, I'll be posting chapters very regularly. XD So it won't be THAT bad.

#14 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·

Awsomesauce :twilightsmile:

#15 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2670995

Speaking of....Time to get on 3. Come back in a few hours. ;p

#16 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·

Pizza sauce!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

#17 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·

It has been a few hours. I do not see any changes.

#18 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2671796

I was just taking a break D; Fine, I'll go into overdrive >:C

#19 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2671802 :rainbowlaugh: Poor you.

But take your time. As they say, quality over quantity!

"They" are jerks.

#20 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2671828

i'm trying ya know. Having twenty tabs open, music playing, and peeps demanding for another chapter doesn't help my concentration. Need more orange juice! Alright, I'll go finish.

#21 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2671849 Twenty tabs?

Your computer must be going slow.

#22 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2671864

THERE! Now let me rest. lol

#23 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
#24 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2672124

God damnit just read it and be content. D:

#25 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·

First! ...Oh, wait...:unsuresweetie:

#26 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2672290

Technically..You kind of are the first, but whatevs. lol...Hope you enjoyed it though. ^_~

#27 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 19h ago · 1 · ·

I was actually planning to whore myself out to peeps and ask you guys promote my story, but you know what? Fuck that. If this thing is going to get popular, it's gotta be by myself giving more of an effort in the story itself. I'll get to work on chapter 4! >:)

#28 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 18h ago · · ·

>>2677539 Whoa... that's admirable as hell....

PROMOTING 'TILL THE END!!! :derpytongue2:

Edit: Ooh! More content!

#29 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 15h ago · 1 · ·

I'm wondering if I should leave this one on a real cock sucker cliffhanger or not...Hehe ;]]]]

#30 · Chapter 4 · 60w, 14h ago · · ·

Poor B... Poor Mr. B! :fluttercry:

I'm enjoying the life-lesson theme here.

#31 · Chapter 4 · 60w, 14h ago · 1 · ·

>>2678875

Life changes just like your views on it. Stay tuned as Mr. B continues his wonderfulness. ^^

#32 · Chapter 4 · 60w, 13h ago · 2 · ·

I can't fathom why this story Isn't more known to public ....*shares page* :twilightblush: hope u don't mind :twilightblush:

#33 · Chapter 4 · 60w, 13h ago · · ·

>>2679073

d'awww you are the sweetest. Well...I do like my stuff to get a little more known. ^^

I love it when a fan helps out, so please, go ahead! ^^ And f course...Thanks for your support. This is planned to be a pretty long story, so hopefully it'll get a bit bigger by the first half ;p

#34 · Chapter 4 · 60w, 1h ago · · ·

Now that was a lot of Information!

Anyways, nice work on that chapter! Keep up the great work! :pinkiehappy:

#35 · Chapter 4 · 60w, 1h ago · · ·

>>2680826

I'm trying man, this is hard to write chapter every day.

#36 · Chapter 4 · 60w, 2m ago · · ·

>>2680882

I can imagine, just take your time. ^^

#38 · Chapter 4 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2681625

Oh boy...You might want to move to another continent because the sobbin' doesn't stop there. :p

#39 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·

I am confused:rainbowhuh:, "her hoof" "her hand", which does she have, hooves or hands:ajbemused:?

#40 · Chapter 5 · 28w, 4d ago · · ·

So this came in

:twilightoops:

But I really enjoyed it. Hard work and long chapters pay off.

:trixieshiftright:

#41 · Chapter 6 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·

>>3768882 Hey, it's not over yet. I'm working diligently to finish this story. Just you wait! :yay:

#42 · Chapter 6 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·

>>3765365 Hey. Hey...I think I made DRASTIC improvements now, so....shush. :trixieshiftright:

#43 · Chapter 6 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·

wowthatwentfast

but still, :heart:

#44 · Chapter 6 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·

>>3779361 another chapter coming up in an hour or so. BE PREPARED :pinkiecrazy:

#45 · Chapter 7 · 28w, 16h ago · · ·

;_;

#46 · Chapter 7 · 28w, 6h ago · · ·
#47 · Chapter 7 · 27w, 6d ago · · ·

>>3791172 I can't.

I can't handle this, son. :fluttercry:

#48 · Chapter 7 · 27w, 6d ago · · ·

>>3793722

Enjoying, no?

#49 · Chapter 7 · 27w, 5d ago · · ·

>>3796664 In truth, yeah.

but slow down the story a bit keep it up!

#50 · Chapter 7 · 27w, 5d ago · · ·

>>3799604

I have the next chapter ready for read, just gimme a bit to finally submit it. :twilightsheepish:

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