The Mane 6 go on Vacation to one of Daring Do's most famous places she ever visited. The place she now calls home.
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I get what you're trying to do, not using somepony's name over and over, but you really over do it. Just say Spike and Celestia instead of purple dragon and white alicorn. Still, writing isn't bad. Not great, not bad.
253192 With this I agree.
Where are you going with this, anyways?
Nuke?
295112 Nuke? What nuke? Are you referring to Daring's crew? They're pretty much trapped on that island. It keeps them alive, but if they leave, they die. Or something like that. I dunno, saw something akin to that in a movie somewhere. Hero kills villain, villain turns out not to be dead, and is left at that.
295210 Nuke them
It's the only solution
295354 The only way to win is to ragequit, and erase the save file.
Too bad it was corrupted.
I'm actually surprised this even got as many thumb ups and/or downs as it did. I had a few friends who said they couldn't even find it, no matter how hard they mashed the 'fetch entries' button. Lol, the Ponified Hangover came up a hundred times for the one time Marik up there saw my fic. Or, that's what he said, anyways.
295658 Are we talking about the same thing broski
298316 I hope so.
298483 Yeah so I was saying nuke the island
298496 yeah... That would hopefully work. They won't die as long as the island's perpetuation spell is active.
298512 Yes but with no island
And so we get Twilight to try and enjoy life...and get in shape of course
. I will see what else a vacation can do shall we?
...Did not expect that that. Oh well, on to the adventure!...And the seeing of our dear ponies and dragon not turned into dinner and or something bad to happen to them.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAnd...they're fuuuuuuuuuckeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed. Or at the most least Spike, Celestia and Luna can save the day
!!
So it's a bit like Lost (or at least I think so, considering I've never seen the series, only heard of it). Anyway, badass Spike, have some inmortal evil ponies, and more trauma in the midst. i did not expect that much of dark in the thing but nonetheless, great as well.
394743 Aaaand, it was a rush job. I wrote the last two chapters within two hours, and got it submitted for the contest with 6 minutes 48 seconds to spare.
395123 Ohhhh...still gonna continue it though? While you can do whatever you want, I would prefer if it was NOT left as a open interpretation
didn't expect this either, this vacation seems to have taken a wrong turn somewhere on the way.
yeah, there gonna get eaten, maybe Spike, Celestia and Luna can have the leftovers or some desert.
mmh, roasted pony with chilisauce or cottoncandymane
395123
how in the hell is spike so powerfull, did he had some firebreathing training or something
836587 Well, maybe.
836597
Fill your dang plotholes, get your act together, goshdarnit
1815850 Hee hee, I literally wrote the last two chapters in less than an hour. Woohoo~
I'm impressed.
A theme vacation?
I'm still going to say theme vacation.
Well damn I was WAAAAAAAAAY off.
2314856 lol, don't worry. This is my worst fic by far, mostly because I wrote it in less than two days, but also because I didn't give fuck-all in the way of an actual plot line. I don't know why I've left it up, honestly... Maybe I like how awful it is.