Not bad, not bad at all. A few capitalization hitches with your "I"s, but other than that, it was great! Can't wait for more!

>>216445216445

I really wish my computer did that for me. I knew I was gonna have a few of those. Thanks for reading, I'll do some updating eventually.

So i can forget That Silver Streak?

Damn, and that was one of my real favorites, too.

Oh, well, still tracking.

>>217713217713

Sorry, bro. Dunno what to tell you, just couldn't write it anymore. I'm hoping to use some of the same general plot points and stuff, so you'll definitely recognize some of the story after a while. I just felt the need to scrap it and start over.

>>217842217842

damn.

just damn.

>>217857217857

Still hung up about it, eh?

>>218351218351 Really cool hope to see more of it soon did you have other HIE stories? Good though enjoyedyay!

>>222539222539

Other H.i.E.'s? Nope, just two shipping fics. Glad you like this one, though.

>>222555222555HiE is Human in Equestria.

>>227164227164

Yes, I know. And I was just informing you that I don't have any other HiE's to answer your question. 'Cause you asked. I was just saying what else I do have. I'm not a complete derp, you know.

Yes he is.

AM NOT. GO BACK TO THE CELLAR.

No.

Don't mind him, skyscraper. He's a bit of a troll.

Problem?

Yes.

>>227957227957 Sorry I wasn't sure by the way you said your comment (STUPID NO TELEPATHIC MESSAGES THROUGH THE INTERNET).

>>228243228243

Telepathic? Oh, you mean Voice. Yeah, he's just the sarcastic, arrogant voice inside my head. I think I let him through too often.

Eeyup.

*psst* Hey, Zaiker. Ya know me? :D

>>254090254090

Sorry, just trying to get your attention. *deep breath*

I'm really glad that you mentioned iBrony. Absolute awesome :D

And I do love my fair share of HiE's. Unless well, the grammar is really, really, REALLY bad.

Likewise, do make more, otherwise I'll arrange for you and Pinkie to make cupcakes.

"You're the one reading stories about My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. We're all equally childish here."

Agreed good sir, agreed....

>>254090254090

Yeah, I know ya, Calc. Heheh. Don't worry, more to come so-

Whenever he stops being so freaking lazy.

...Yeah, that's actually pretty accurate.

I wish I had a voice in my head that disagrees with me that speaks on the internet. Voice, shut up or Pinkie will want you to make cupcakes with her. (is obbessed with making a mention of that FF. I think it drove me a little insane :P)

>>254224254224

Well. Okay then. But are you sure you wouldn't like to join us? I heard Pinkie's cupcakes are just...to die for...

OKAY, that's enough out of you. Geez, Voice. You know, if you want mine, you can have him, Calc.

What, no telling me to go to the cellar?

...

By the way, I was implying that YOU would be the one in the cupcakes, Calc.

I think he got it.

Too late! I've found a good person to torment.

Wait, what? Damnit, I got a voice... Sorry, he's gonna have to stay :/

And I'm going to tell Pinkie that she's only your THIRD favourite.

D: I need help.

>>254246254246

*sigh* Great. Like another one of these had to show up.

Hey! He just stole our bit!

And we stole our bit from schizophrenics.

...Huh.

Say what now?

What he said.

I'd reckon we should put them in a jar together and see what happens.

>>254259254259

No. We'd all be dead within a week.

Oh dear. That's not good 0_o.

Oh good! It seems to have shut up.

Psyche!

...

>>254288254288

Heh, that's why I shut mine in the cellar. He doesn't stay there for too long, but it keeps me at least a little bit sane.

I've already lost my sanity. Thanks Pinkie and her method of making Cupcakes.. Just.. Thanks..

Finally! Excellent chapter :D

>>271438271438

Well, thanks ya very much!

Wow 0_o Mind reader much.

I can get on this site at school, but not iBrony. YAY SCHOOL NOT CARING ABOUT FAN FICTION SITES!

>>272812272812

Deleted 'em!

>>274542274542

I was sort of joking, but okay then! Well, I am probably gonna change a few things here and there, but overall you will see a lot of similarities to the old one.

You might not like knowing this, but . . .

I'm the one who released those voices in your head.

Hey, Zaiker's annoying voice, where are you now?

In the cellar; where else?

Calclor's annoying voice; What have you succeeded in?

I MADE CALCLOR LOSE HIS/HER SANITY!

Good job, voice!

Call me PPVOI. Like, pe-voi.

What does that mean?

Pinkie Pie Voice Of Insanity.

Zaiker

wat r u doin

Zaiker

STAHP

hi

>>16203331620333

Zaiker.

Let's see.

The story began long, LONG ago. Before ending of season 2 and 3.

I'm seriously fucking confused.

Do more work. Work inbetween this chapter.

>>16230091623009

Why? Not like this actually takes place during the timeline of the show.

>>16297561629756

More story building.