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Athanix 41716

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    Athanix's Stories (4)

    • Realities (Cancelled)
      Which reality is real? Let us find out.

      12,150 words · 1,099 views · 22 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Existences (Cancelled)
      With conflict there is always two sides to the story.
      11,017 words · 814 views · 15 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Seen by Another (Cancelled)
      What if you knew your friends only purpose in life was only to live, to die?
      14,105 words · 605 views · 9 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Where I've gone
      Rainbow Dash will learn that all things heal with time.
      3,498 words · 191 views · 2 likes · 5 dislikes

    [~A fire breaks out in the Everfree forest.]

    [A poorly executed,rushed, plot hole ridden piece of fanfiction. Avert your eyes! I will not, however, delete this or edit it in any way, shape or form. What you are reading is pure unadulterated fail.]

    When you think life can't get any better, it can. But when you think life can't get any worse, it will. And that is what life is, life is a never ending battle of will. Some ponies face that challenge everyday with a smile on there face and friends to support them no matter what the cost. Some ponies though can break under the pressure that life bears down on them until they are unrecognizable. And when that happens many things may come of it. Some ponies choose to drown their sorrows in their desires, only pushing them away for a moment of bliss. Some ponies will forever dwell on their sorrows allowing it to fester within them, only to have it shatter them.

       While others still will deny their sorrows and live a life in lies. The truth may set you free, but sometimes the truth hurts. Some ponies will never face the truth living in fear of the pain it may bring.

    First Published
    6th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    19th Feb 2012

    Comments ( 3 )

    #1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That was... beautiful to say the least. Not so much about a fire, but i understand the concept of relating the to topics. (The chicken and the fire.) Very good. Got my vote!

    #2 · 64w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Wuuut?

    So...is Dash hallucinating and forgetting things? She seems to have forgotten that she knows Fluttershy, too.This is odd...but interesting, and well written. Have a vote.

    #3 · 62w, 12h ago · · ·
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    cliff hanger... love it

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