Earth. Now just a memory for those who escaped, and what left was a total uncertainty for them all on-board Spero, a gigantic starship. Built to ensure Humanity future, even if the hope to reach a new world where they could restart...
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This is my first story, so it's likely will evolve as it goes on, hope you'll enjoy it
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at first glance i could of sworn this was another spyro fic
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Haha, it is not, Spero is latin, and it's mean Hope. I haven't seen it anywhere else, and just give the ship the name hope in plane english seamed to simple, what can i say, i love google translator
The concept is pretty good, you just need to work on the grammer and spelling. I would recommend getting an editor, this has the potential to be an interesting fic.
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Thank you
and i know i have some chalange with english, not being a Native speaker but i'll look for some one who could help with the grammar and spelling, i do read the chapters couple times to try find issues, as well use the spell check nonstop, so i hope it's not to bad 
this story would give a grammar nazi a heart attack
but this does have the potential to be an interesting story if you can find an editor.
i look forward to the next jumble of words you call a chapter
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I'm currently working on the next chapter and this will be a longer one, as well the story began pick up some speed, will see how soon i can finish it and do my initial grammar check so i don't get nuked, well maybe just a few times
2656487 "i look forward to the next jumble of words you call a chapter
" If it weren't for that twilight smile emoticon I would think you were being a douche.
You do realize how that comment could be taken the wrong way right?
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oh i know, that's exactly why i put it there, so you'd know i didn't want you to take it seriously
The light colors are really hard to read, and seem a bit unnecessary.
Nice fic, I love the story! The only problem is the grammar in some places, but that can be fixed
Can't wait to see more, keep up the good work!
Colored text? It seems... pointless.
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Good story though
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Thank you
I was experimenting, wasn't fully sure how well some can follow the discussions but if it's all good then time to remove it, lemme just call DISCORD!
You just simply can't find the guy when needed
Now heres the thing, who figures out, where i took certain elements, reference of the drone and holographic message, will win a muffin! I help a little, not an game, and not an Hollywood bomb shell movie, but it is a movie
I got nothing, maybe the hitchhikers guide to the galaxy.
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Nope, it's not that one
I help, it was originally aired on Discovery Channel
2665294 Oh oh I saw that! Wasn't the documentary called 'Alien Planet'?
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Yes, yes, thats the one
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It was a pretty good documentary, even though it is all speculations but i can see it go down along those lines if we get to that point in or exploration of space. The A.A.R.D drones would resemble as well, but with out the flexi neck and arms, and instead an UAV like optical cupola head and robotic arms.
I wanted to pick elements different then, say HALO or many of other Scifi shows, don't get me wrong, I'm addict to them at an unhealthy level, but there are simply to many around.
I like the story but agh don't get me started on the Mane Douchebags in "Boast Busters".
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I agree haha, but as all coins, have two sides, and frankly, both sides were at fault, and some bad luck n fate mixed in.
Not like i couldn't see it change, i really love Trixies character
Dawww trixies cute when she has two broken legs and isnt egotistical.
I hope they brought guns, its not an HiE without guns!
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Oh i know all wants guns, and there will be, but have to wait!
<------ Becouse Ego n Godmode are go hand in hand 
I can totally see us blaming the ponies if one of our evacuation shuttles just exploded for seemingly no reason.
I can totally see us blaming the ponies if one of our evacuation shuttles just exploded for seemingly no reason.
Yey explosions!
For some reason imminent sadness makes me happy.... Meh I think too much let the death rain begin!
2708162 ya.....that really does sound like something we would do now that you say it....
I wont spoil things
But yes that's one of the possibilities and i know you guys want some bullets, nukes and magical beams fly around in a perfect apocalypse.
this is pretty good would be even better if you used better grammar
2710149 It would make sense, they already know that there is a species that can do stuff such as magic. And we wouldn't know the reason our shuttle exploded... because... well... there wouldn't be a shuttle to investigate. The shuttle was also entering the atmosphere so, it would be rather logical to blame the ponies.
and agen, if any one w
agen?
AGEN?
Anyway good story, as always want more.
Yay another chapter!
good story but u may want to get a proof reader for grammar reasons needless to say it wont be me
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Don't fear everyone! I'll get to editing this story as soon as I finish with his story of Through Crimson Eyes. In the meantime, I recommend reading that story! You can find the link to the edited version in the stories comments... Somewhere... Once I start editing this story I'll post a link to the edited version in the comments here. However, the links will be taken down eventually as Ice4smaster will eventually import the edited versions into the fimfiction versions.
Don't give up on Ice4smaster. He's just having trouble. Don't blame him for his bad grammar, please.
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Here's something from the comments on the edited version of Through Crimson Eyes; It's from Ice4smaster:
Did you get the drones ideal from a science show I remember watching something with drones like you described same color I think
Whyou would they have brought any live creatures on the shuttle? Mayhaps, stowaway?
Awesome story bro!
Too bad there won't be a sequel.