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Feeling unloved, everybody's favorite filly accepts a flyer from a changeling in disguise to join a secret war effort to raise a new changeling army and overthrow the thrown! She then faces the scariest thing known to ponydom... Government Organization.

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:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
That ending.

One modification to make it more plausible according to show canon:

If we managed to sneak in a Changeling disguised as you tonight, it would be a huge step in our plan to murder your entire species.

I'd change murder to enslave, judging from what happened at the wedding.:moustache:

2905626 I figured they wouldn't hold back this time.

Draining the love, like in the comic books. (Their cannon is questionable, but I liked the idea).
I'm starting to see your point, though. Maybe I will change it to "enslave"; it makes more sense in the story as well as FIM.
Thanks for the fave, by the way! :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

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