Now, I can honestly say that I had a LOT of fun writing this. Maybe it's because it's short little comedy thing instead of the sadfics I'm so used to writing, but meh. I hope you all enjoy it as much as I do!

Also: First!

Also also: Make sure you rate/comment. Give me areas I need to improve in so I can make my next fic even better!

I was so confused throughout the entire thing. That's what I loved about it. Perfectly fitting for a fanfic centered around Pinkie Pie. XD

This was ridiculous! Loved it <3

Time paradox FOREVER

So, yeah, Twilight Sparkle can send ponies back in time for a short while now.

Just another trick to add to her list.

this makes about as much sense as an illogical logical paradox.

which is awesome.

Quite everypony! Philosoraptor needs to think about time travel.

I have  a fanfic called portal to the past. You don't always need Twilight to send you back in time, sometimes them time travel portals are discovered by accident

Whoops, appears I left a few errors in this. Don't worry, they should be ALL fixed by now. Hope that didn't detract from the story too much.

I feel it lacked description. otherwise that, random like it should be, and . . .

wait, this is by CARMINE? He decides to publish a story that is not sad - a first. congrats. *applaud*

>>214356214356 *Him, I'm a stallion.

>>214362214362 *edits comment, changes she to he*

What do you mean? I have no idea what you're talking about. That comment seems fine to me.

>>214431214431 Lies and slanders!

Good fun!  And further Rainbow Dash comeuppance always brings a warm feeling to my shrivelled heart.

But..    ....in the section "...the stairs had pictures of the Cake family promiscuously placed on the walls..." the word promiscuously derailed my brain for several sentences and I worried it was going cloppy on me.     And I got the fear so bad...

(Disclaimer:  I R NOT RITER.  You are, so feel free to disregard as you wish.)

So...

This was okay.

Same stuff I said as usual. 4/5

I liked this lots and lots, I also lol'd

It is good but your other stories are better.  I found it strange that EQD has only announced this one and not your other stories.  To anypony reading this, you should check out Carmine's other stories.

Pfft. What does Pinkie need time-traveling selves for? She's got the Sense.

This was alright, other than the logic error that the glue would harden and not come out of the bucket thus defeating the entire story... maybe change it to syrup instead? It wasn't very funny, to me at least, and it had a pretty see through plot but whatever I'll give it a like although I'd probably give it a two and a half star.

Characterization is off. Rainbow would never do that.

And I mean never. "Loyalty" has a meaning you know?.

My overactive imagination was going "AH!  This is something bad!  Maybe its Cupcakes in reverse!  Or even Rocket to Insanity in reverse!  Or maybe Rainbow Dash is building an evil Dentist Robot!  I...I can't handle the pressure!"

and then I died.

Cute story though.  My money's on Rainbow Dash.  Well, actually, Rainbow DOES realize that Pinkie will go back in time to stop her again if she DOES succeed, right?  They could start an endless time loop!

awesome story man! i expect to see more from you soon. you had a really cool plot idea but it was a little short. and i kinda expected more of a reaction from rainbow dash. but good story never the less 4/5

Fun and silly. Cute story. It was a dumb prank though. If Dash thought up something really witty and mostly harmless, like convincing Fluttershy her chickens were singing opera when she wasn't looking, I doubt Pinkie would mind.

Awesome :D Thought prank sucks, Pinkie rules

That was very...very...umm...Pinkie

Nice read. But Rainbow seemed a little too naughty for her usual self...

Ah well. If Pinkie asked Twilight for a time ride, than maybe Rainbow could ask Doctor Whooves?