A Manehatten weather pony on vacation is led through the Everfree Forest by Rainbow Dash. Due to circumstances they are forced to spend the night in the ruins of the Princesses ancient home. They find they have a lot in common, maybe even too much in common, and they are attracted to each other. So what are they to do? Balance their aspirations, jobs and physical attraction as best they can.
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Any chance this will ever get a sequel or epilogue to it? I gotta know how this turns out as it is a great DashxOC story that deserves more attention on this site. Probably even a feature in my opinion.
2634271 I wouldn't say a sequel is out of the question but I don't really know how it would turn out. Right now I'd say Chase and Rainbow are at the 'friends with benefits' stage, thanks to Zecora. It could get very complicated which would make for a good story. It might be fun to see who is willing to give up what in this relationship and what the consequences would be. BTW I'm really trying not to drift into the porn side of a story so any sexual stuff would take place off camera.
I appreciate the compliment and I'm glad you like the story. Whatever happens with this story, I'm going to finish uploading the stories that I have completed first. I have one more old story to finish editing and upload but it's a monster 100,000 words and still needs several chapters to wrap it up. Almost forgot, I just finished editing another short story which will be up tonight.
2634538 The behind the scenes clop is fine, I've seen both sides of that both in and behind stories and neither really matters for me. The biggest thing I'm hoping for is just some expansion, possibly, on their relationship and the progress/turns it may make if the story was expanded further. But your time is your own, and by extension your writing ideas.
2634791 After giving it some thought, there will be a sequel. It will probably start appearing around the beginning of July. Thanks again for the input.
2657752 Yays!
This was good. and i eagerly await sad sequel
2704998 Thanks very much. I think the whole thing will be about the size of the first part. The first chapters will be about the anticipation leading up to the Cloudsdale meeting and what goes on there. Should be fun.