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    Lunar Black's Stories (3)

    • Flare of Hope
      After 21 years living as someone else, could you save a home you never knew?

      28,261 words · 686 views · 35 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Ivory Diaries
      The long forgotten diary of Ivory Keys
      1,188 words · 187 views · 5 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Field Notes of a Winning Bug Collector
      Flitter just wants to be cool like her older sister. By any means necessary.
      1,578 words · 145 views · 8 likes · 7 dislikes

    About nine months after the concert that shook the Equestrian music industry to its core, Deep Bass, and Vinyl couldn't be happier. Well, for now, at least, because any Pegasus knows that what goes up eventually comes down… hard.

    The first-pony sequel to Let the Bass Ring. Oh yeah. I'm pullin out all the stops on this one.

    Cover Image by... Well... Me. :D

    Rated Mature for chapters 23of and 24

    First Published
    13th Feb 2012
    Last Modified
    29th Jun 2012

    Comments ( 109 )

    #1 · Chapter 7 · 64w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I think you should write more like this! Or direct me to something similar. :3 I love these kinds of FanFics!

    #2 · Chapter 7 · 64w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>245953

    Well, there's a fic on fanfiction.net that inspired my first fic (which is both on ff.net and here) which was Let the Bass Ring. The other fic is called Haunting Remix. I'm sure you'd like it, actually.

    #3 · Chapter 7 · 64w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>247388

    I have read Let The Bass Ring and loved it too. I'll check out Haunting Remix now.

    #4 · Chapter 8 · 64w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Great new chapter! :D when do you think the next will be available? :3

    #5 · Chapter 8 · 64w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>251088

    When I get the chance to write it.

    #6 · Chapter 8 · 64w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Heheh, I can't wait. :P

    #7 · Chapter 8 · 64w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Awesome story so far, can't wait to see where this is heading. :pinkiehappy:

    Though the one thing that annoys me a bit is how Mic was so quickly ignored from the story, it seems like Bass is neglecting him. (or was it on purpose?)

    Apart from that, you've earnt yourself a track and a like!

    #8 · Chapter 8 · 64w, 2d ago · · ·
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    He isn't being neglected. In the story (much like in real life, apparently) Mic is a very busy pony, and fret not, dear Brony. Mic will be back. In fact the next chapter is taking a very interesting turn, I assure you. :ajsmug:

    #9 · Chapter 9 · 64w, 1d ago · · ·
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    First view and first comment! lol, Great chapter! :3 Once again, can't wait for more!

    #10 · Chapter 9 · 64w, 1d ago · · ·
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    The chapter only reason the chapter was so short was because I got the plot point out of the way rather quickly in that one, mostly due to my setting of the scene in chapter 7. Since I did that, I didn't set the scene in the beginning like I usually do. Also, let's see if you can point out the Allegrezza reference in chapter 8.

    #11 · Chapter 9 · 64w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>258625

    You must've been lurking the shit out of my story cuz you commented like 10 minutes after I posted it.

    #12 · Chapter 9 · 64w, 10h ago · · ·
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    I wish I could be on the front page like everypony else.:trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::ajbemused:

    #13 · Chapter 10 · 63w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Great chapter! :3 I love your writing! :D

    #14 · Chapter 10 · 63w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>274160

    Thanks bro.  If even one person appreciates my work, that's enough to keep me going. Thanks for your love and support. By the way, how do you like the new cover?

    #15 · Chapter 10 · 63w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>275990

    That's a pretty sweet new cover. I like it!

    #16 · Chapter 10 · 63w, 3d ago · · ·
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    awesome story dude!

    #17 · Chapter 11 · 63w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Now there's an even bigger cliff hanger!  :pinkiegasp: how are they going to react after the fight?! What about Flats?!

    I would like to point out how well you did the action scene, i don't often see writers get these sorts of scenes so concise. Keep it up, i'm waiting for moar :pinkiehappy:

    #18 · Chapter 11 · 63w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Nice chapter. I dunno why I couldnt get to this earlier! :3 Oh well.. Keep up the great writing! :D

    #19 · Chapter 11 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hey, guys.

    >>282147

    I guess my thing for action scenes comes from my time writing WoWfics. And don't worry. Your questions will be answered in time.

    #20 · Chapter 12 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Finally, another long awaited chapter, published! :3 Keep up the great work! Love your writing.

    #21 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Yay new chapter! It may seem like I'm lurking the shit outta this but I rally am not. I am just on my iPhone and got an email for the update. Now to read...

    #22 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Yes, nice chapter! :3 Keep it up, I love your work.

    #23 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Alright, I kinda didn't want to go here, but I am. I wrote a mature version of chapter 11. After writing the scene from LTBR, I found it would be better to just do it, instead of letting such a beautiful moment in the romance between the two characters slip from the story. I'll be uploading it in due time.

    #24 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I. NEED. MOAR! :pinkiecrazy:

    But in all seriousness, I love your stories, keep up the, most excellent work :twilightsmile:

    #25 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 3d ago · · ·
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    LOVE IT! Please keep writing, and I do wanna read the mature version of chapter 11. Not huge into those kind of pony stories, but honestly, I was slightly disappointed that you left it out after such a lead up to the moment. But please keep writing, this is probably the best story I'm following right now to be honest lol.

    #26 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>354846

    Thanks for the praise and kind words. It means a lot.

    >>354999

    I'll be posting the chapter as soon as I finish it.

    #27 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>355179

    two things.

    I. how do you get my name to quote like that? (im rather new here)

    II. How soon will that be? (lol)

    #28 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 8h ago · · ·
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    >>355335

    Two answers.

    1: You click the reply button on the comment box.

    2: The chapter is posted in its own separate story file, and is awaiting moderator approval at this time. If it doesn't pass, I'll find a way to gdocs it and will provide a link to it.

    #29 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Oh, and btw... Just gonna leave this here.

    #30 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 6h ago · · ·
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    >>354846>>355335>>345289>>282147

    Okay, first off, I only put you all in a reply, so I can spoil my own story. :trollestia:

    There's going to be another fight scene, but not between Vinyl and Ivory. :D

    #31 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 6h ago · · ·
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    >>367297

    I can't wait ^^

    I just know its going to be awesome :twilightsmile:

    #32 · Chapter 14 · 60w, 6h ago · · ·
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    >>367318Unfortunately, I don't know how bloody I'm gonna be able to make it. I will, however, give you a link to a few of the action scenes I wrote for another fic from a different genre. I'm warning you, though. There are sexual scenes, and graphic violence... VERY graphic violence. You've been warned. Epic fight scene 1 And finally, My Favorite Fight Scene

    #33 · Chapter 14 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I.

    NEED.

    MOAR.

    #34 · Chapter 15 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Aw, you had me thinking there was a new chapter!

    #35 · Chapter 15 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Me too...>>37246

    #36 · Chapter 15 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>372462

    >>372570

    Lol. Sorry, guys. Chapter 14 is taking some time, mostly because of my work schedule being as retarded as it is.

    #37 · Chapter 15 · 59w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>372868 nnnnnoooooooo! I want moar:applecry:

    #38 · Chapter 16 · 59w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Nice chapter. I wouldda finished sooner but my friends on Skype kept bugging me. :P

    #39 · Chapter 16 · 59w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Nice, I wish i could keep reading though. Thats the problem with in progress fics, you wanna keep reading but cant.

    #40 · Chapter 16 · 59w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Just a random thought. My two favorite chapter names are "Bassdrop" and "Cut by a Sharp Note" Just had to point that out, dunno why.

    #41 · Chapter 16 · 59w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>387460

    Well, I can guess that Bassdrop means you like dubstep, and Cut By a Sharp Note... I guess it's just the irony in the title.

    #42 · Chapter 16 · 59w, 2d ago · · ·
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    yes, i am a huge fan of dubstep, and Cut by a Sharp Note, I never thought as to why I like it.

    #43 · Chapter 16 · 59w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>387513

    Well, probably because it's the only chapter I've actually written a decent song for. That's why I like it, at least.

    #44 · Chapter 17 · 58w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Nice chapter. :3 defiantly can't wait for more.

    #45 · Chapter 17 · 58w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I needs MOAR

    #46 · Chapter 17 · 58w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Nice Chapter, Can't wait for more... waited a long time for this one too.

    #47 · Chapter 17 · 58w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>418540

    Er....... chapter 16's gonna be a longer wait... due to the addon.

    #48 · Chapter 18 · 58w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Yay, chapter 16! :3

    #49 · Chapter 18 · 58w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Nice chapter

    #50 · Chapter 18 · 58w, 7h ago · · ·
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    >>427723

    Yeah. I realize that it was short, but it's better than nothing.

    #51 · Chapter 18 · 58w, 6h ago · · ·
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    Oh, and just to put it out there, since I got chapter 16 out so fast, It's gonna be a decent amount of time for chapter 17. Sorry. Navy stuff.

    #52 · Chapter 18 · 58w, 2h ago · · ·
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    -sniffles-

    #53 · Chapter 18 · 57w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>429343

    Don't cry. This just means that I'll have more time to write while we're underway, so chapter 17 could be a long one. Or I can pump out two chapters.

    #54 · Chapter 19 · 56w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Update woo hoo:yay:

    #55 · Chapter 19 · 56w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I had something to fight for. DAWWWWWWW.

    #56 · Chapter 19 · 55w, 3d ago · · ·
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    this story is really getting to my nerves next thing you know i might cry :facehoof: darn it WUT R MEH FEELINGS DOING

    #57 · Chapter 19 · 55w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>502487

    Game set and match

    #58 · Chapter 20 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·
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    new chapter yay :yay: and first :moustache:

    edit

    if dat no gud DJ lied about there life

    I WILL BREAK THE 4TH WALL AND SLAP THAT BITCH!!!

    that is all :moustache:

    #59 · Chapter 20 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #60 · Chapter 20 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This is a GREAT chapter, didn't expect that. I wonder which ending I'll like better....

    #61 · Chapter 20 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I loved the little shoutout to Mic and Jackleapp :twilightsmile: made me smile ^^

    Again, keep up the awesome work, it always brightens up my day when you bring out a new chapter :yay:

    #62 · Chapter 20 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·
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    wow great chapter. So the story is close to the end? I don't want it to end! :fluttercry:

    #63 · Chapter 20 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>507806

    Probably not. The alternate ending will probably just be a short cut version.

    #64 · Chapter 20 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>507821 I'm okay with that.

    #65 · Chapter 20 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·
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    loved it :rainbowwild:

    #66 · Chapter 6 · 55w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Freshly cooked bacon. 0.o

    #67 · Chapter 21 · 54w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oooh, that was interesting.

    #68 · Chapter 21 · 54w, 2d ago · · ·
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    DAWWWW! That letter was SO BUCKING CUTE!

    #70 · Chapter 21 · 54w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>543870 :applejackconfused: how u get vinyl emoticon?

    #71 · Chapter 21 · 54w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>545369 magic *snort snort*

    #72 · Chapter 21 · 54w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>545380:flutterrage::flutterrage:

    Hmm. Let's try :vinyl:

    :dj:

    :djpon-3:

    :dj pon-3:

    Hmmm. Fuck I'm out of ideas. Tells me!

    Wait!

    :vinylscratch:

    :vscratch:

    :scratchie:

    :vinny:

    :fuck I'm actually out of ideas now:

    #73 · Chapter 22 · 54w, 13h ago · · ·
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    tears have been shed

    #74 · Chapter 22 · 54w, 8h ago · · ·
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    bro you made me cry and i dont cry for anything not even in funerals

    manly tears been shed

    #75 · Chapter 22 · 54w, 7h ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry::applecry::raritycry::raritydespair: there needs to be more sad emoticons on this site.

    #76 · Chapter 23 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    dawwww cute fluff!

    #78 · Chapter 23 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>565605 I'm just gonna stop asking.

    #79 · Chapter 23 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>565956 i call it magic *snort snort*

    #80 · Chapter 23 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>566797 I found the blog post with them from a NICE guy. Thanks for the sarcastic bitchy remarks though!:pinkiehappy:

    #82 · Chapter 23 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>569074 meh. Touchè.

    #83 · Chapter 23 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>569074>>569061

    Ladies, ladies! Relax. I'm working on chapter 22, so don't rip each other's heads off

    #84 · Chapter 23 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>570157:flutterrage:that's my job, mate.:flutterrage:

    #85 · Chapter 24 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Good luck to ya Bass, i know what its like to have a demon inside as im a sufferer of Multiple Personality Disorder, go kick that sorry spirits flank!!

    #86 · Chapter 24 · 49w, 4d ago · · ·
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    ITS HERE ITS HERE!

    #87 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 6h ago · · ·
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    This story Deserves a Comment. I LOVE IT SO FAR! It is Kinda Messed Up, But Good Plot line. And Let The Bass Ring Was Great too.

    #88 · Chapter 24 · 47w, 38m ago · · ·
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    CLIFFHANGERS!!! They are the bane of my existence.... :fluttercry:

    #89 · Chapter 25 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    5 in the morning? Great time for an update :derpytongue2:

    #90 · Chapter 25 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>829735

    Think of it as a good morning surprise

    #91 · Chapter 25 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>829749 *Early morning

    Sort of like Christmas morning. :pinkiegasp:

    #92 · Chapter 26 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Super Speedy Update Machine 5000

    #93 · Chapter 26 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>829849

    I wrote both chapters at the same time, but was at sea, so I just posted them

    #94 · Chapter 26 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Why cliffhangers Why :fluttercry: other than that grate story:twilightsmile:

    #95 · Chapter 26 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>833800

    I don't see it as a cliffhanger. In fact, I believe Iended the chaptee rather cliffhangerlessly.

    #96 · Chapter 26 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>834868 Ya i i guess its not a cliffhanger. It just makes me want to reed what happens next but its not there yet lol. O ya and the part about ivory in the last chapter was messed up dude like so not ok.:pinkiesick: Just saying still grate chapters tho

    #97 · Chapter 26 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>835357

    All I have to say is that I warned you all.

    #98 · Chapter 26 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>836544 Where was this warning i saw none of them.... lol

    #99 · Chapter 25 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    You Sir, Lunar Black, Need to Add Warnings for that Type of thing... :twilightangry2:

    #100 · Chapter 26 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>837038

    There was No warning... :twilightoops:

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