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  • T Silent Ponyville 2

    Fluttershy has been having horrible nightmares and goes to see Twilight for help.
    52,706 words · 9,472 views  ·  695  ·  12 · gore
  • E The Rainbow's Surprise

    Rainbow Dash is hiding something from Fluttershy
    19,432 words · 2,160 views  ·  209  ·  2
  • T Silent Ponyville Side Stories

    Several stories that tie into Silent Ponyville
    22,547 words · 2,735 views  ·  225  ·  3
  • T Silent Ponyville 3

    Twilight must confront a town overcome by a demonic fog.
    139,761 words · 8,224 views  ·  747  ·  25 · gore
  • E Too Shy for a Rainbow

    Fluttershy must confront her feelings for Rainbow Dash (After Silent Ponyville)
    17,538 words · 5,931 views  ·  403  ·  12
  • E Study of the Mind Delve

    Twilight tries to learn more about the Mind Delve spell.
    11,674 words · 2,215 views  ·  161  ·  3
  • E A Hearth's Warming Date

    Twilight and Big Mac decide to spend Hearth's Warming Eve Together
    3,774 words · 1,437 views  ·  81  ·  9

Blog Posts15

  • 63w, 6d
    How Silent Ponyville 3's endings are going to work

    I'm just going to post the canon boss fight and canon ending first, then all the alternate endings as I have time to write them.

    If you're following Motherly, you're probably aware I'm really really busy with a whole lot of things. Not just Motherly, but Lightning Blitz, commissions, Starswirl Academy, and trying to have a bit of fun between them in my free time.

    There will be alternate endings, but the canon ones will come first.

    6 comments · 422 views
  • 66w, 3d
    Silent Ponyville 3: Chapter 11, now in editing

    Took waaaaaaaaay longer than it ever needed to, but I finally found the right inspiration and words to sit down and just finish the dang thing.

    So now it just needs to go through the editing ringer, see what comes out in the end.

    And once it's out, the big bulk of the story is finished. Which means it'll be time for the grand finale, the endings.

    8 comments · 255 views
  • 73w, 4d
    Status of SP3 Final Chapters

    Motherly Scootaloo is coming upon one of it's bigger climaxes really quickly here, and all of my creative energy has been primarily on that. There's also the fact that I'm officially a writer on Starswirl Academy, so time has to be dedicated to that, and I'll be honest in that I'm definitely motivated to write for it.

    I have the general idea in my head of what I want for the final chapter, but I worry the words I want to put down won't be interesting, or will be treading too much of the same ground that has already been tread. I think that's part of the block on creativity to it.

    But as is, I do have to bunker down and finish a huge project for Motherly Scootaloo, so I'm sorry that the final chapters will be delayed even more. Here's hoping I can get it out for you guys soon enough though, I know you've all been patiently waiting so far. And I can't tell you enough how much I appreciate that.

    3 comments · 263 views
  • 83w, 2d
    The final full chapter

    It's weird knowing that the next chapter of Silent Ponyville 3 is the last full one. Once I write it most speculation will be out the window with much more solid facts. Of course there will still be SOME guesstimations as to what I was doing, which I hope will make sense and wrap up neatly, but whose to say if they fully will or not. At the very least, everything had a purpose and reason in my head.

    So yeah, we're looking at the final legs of the story like this:

    Chapter 11

    Final Boss Fight A & B

    Endings

    And yes, the REAL boss fight and the CANON ending will be labeled clearly for the people who don't want to bother reading all the alternate endings (though I don't know why you wouldn't, that's half the fun of this).

    And once it's over, Silent Ponyville 3 will be the last 'Silent Ponyville' that I do. I might (I heavily emphasis the word might here) continue the storyline in some later stories, IF I'm inspired to write them. As it stands, I don't have any ideas for an aftermath, so I'm pretty sure this is it. Future stories will likely either follow show canon, my own canon, or will be told in a different format (such as a tumblr).

    I hope that the wait has been worth it, it's pretty much been a year in the making and that's been way too long to leave incomplete.

    8 comments · 307 views
  • 94w, 12h
    It's always kind of funny

    I made Silent Ponyville not too long after getting into the fandom, to ME it feels like a bit of a sloppy fanfic that was riddled with grammatical errors and repetition out the ass (WITH ALL OF HER MIGHT), and yet it STILL gets passed around and is said to be one of the best fanfics people have read.

    And of course I made sequels to it, to half loving it more and the other half liking the first more. It’s weird how that works as well, the sequels seem to be for a more ‘niche’ market while the original is for everyone.

    It’s funny, because you never really know what work you make will be passed around and spoken about the most. I would’ve thought Pregnant Scootaloo would be more well known than Silent Ponyville, but nope. Even now I STILL get new fanart of Silent Ponyville, new comments saying how much they loved the fic, and how for a lot of people it’s what got them into fanfiction. And that’s STILL a YEAR AND A HALF LATER.

    I just… who would’ve thought, you know? When I wrote it I just wanted to prove that horror stories could be better than Cupcakes. I guess I proved my point huh?

    31 comments · 676 views
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Pinkie Pie is being tormented by horrific nightmares. Unable to deal with it by herself anymore she seeks out Twilight's help, but will it have been the best decision when she finds herself alone in an abandoned, fog filled Ponyville?

Sequel: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4676/Too-Shy-for-a-Rainbow

First Published
11th Jul 2011
Last Modified
11th Jul 2011
knighty
Lord Al-knighty

Think you might have forgotten to publish chapter 10.

>>38

no, I made a mistake with it. All the chapters are there, just for some reason (probably due to the site being in beta) chapter 10 was skipped, but Chapter 11 IS chapter 10.

knighty
Lord Al-knighty

>>40

Oh right, you mean because you accidently named it wrong and I haven't added the ability to rename chapters yet :P My apologies.

:derpytongue2: Lol I love the Sam ending. And I was freaked out with the ending where evil pinkie pie came into the real world.

:twilightblush: good game

:coolphoto:

Wow. This...this is beautiful, this here. I'm not familiar with the Silent Hill game, but it didn't stop my enjoyment of this story.  This was dark, this was dramatic, and in the end it was very, very emotional...the explanation of the importance of Grammy's lesson to Pinkie was brilliant, and the fact that you were able to actually make something worthwhile out of the Cupcakes story is a feat in and of itself.

Normally, I find that bloody and grim stories just feel all wrong when mixed with ponies, but this one worked for me for some reason. Maybe it's just that the writing is really good, maybe the flow feels appropriate, I'm not sure what it is, but it works.

By the way, love the alternate ending with Sam. Hey, it wouldn't be Pinkie without some fourth wall demolition, would it? :pinkiecrazy:

By any chance, could you write another? i need my fill of silent hill because of you:twilightangry2: but your a good writer so i forgive you :pinkiehappy: also, ive read the second one about Fluttershy:fluttershysad: and i thought it was frickin amazing! :pinkiecrazy: but now we need one about apple Jack, or Rarity.

I enjoyed this story, it had an interesting concept given that the otherworld was actually Pinkie Pie's dementia, but I can't comment on how similar it was to the first Silent Hill game since I haven't had the pleasure of playing it yet. My only critique would be that there were too many repeated words and in some places, poor sentence structure. It also felt in some parts too much like a game rather than an actual story, which, while very much like pinkie pie does take away from of the tale's atmosphere. I'll be sure to read the second one with fluttershy too :yay:

:fluttercry::raritydespair::applecry:

GOD I CRIED SO MANY TEARS THROUGHOUT THIS STORY... I HAD TO ACTUALLY STOP READING WHEN THEY WENT TO HER GRAVE I CRIED SO MUCH.

...

I remember playing all the Silent Hill games... just... they never had this impact on me. This is entirely different... [god I'm crying again.]

I salute you sir! :rainbowdetermined2:

I cried a lot, but I enjoyed it... Thank you. [I'm back to tears again :(]

END GAME

sorry try again next time :trollestia:

this is the ending i wanted, althought i feel i would have been better if you had written out the part where pinkie describes what happened to there sister. you missed a chance to show octy's reaction to finding out what really happened to her sisters

but non the less i felt it was good

ps i came here from a live narration of this story by some guy whos name  begins with an a on youtube

you can thank him

wow....

almost like a cop out

but its not...

this makes cupcakes make ALOT more sense

thank you

well.... THAT WAS ..... :unsuresweetie: no wors for how great was. i loved it :heart:

esspically the second pinkie pie and stanger danger twist:twistnerd::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

If, by any accident you're polish, check this translation of Silent Ponyville.

http://mylittlebrony.blogspot.com/2011/10/fanfic-silent-ponyville.html

PINKIE! The fourth wall is sensitive! You can't just waltz on into the real world like that, it's baaaaad! Very bad!

Anywho, I love your story. Although Octavia being Pinkie's sister was a bit... :pinkiehappy: random...I think it just adds to your story's flair. You thought of it first, so this is your idea and your fanon that goes with it!

*manly tears*I would have killed the Slenderpony/Slendermane myself if I could have. If I ever get my hands on the colt I'll...I'll...*shattering glass* :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: heheheh!

And now, I sign off!

Godspeed you magnificent bastard-BlazingShadowBrony

I finally got around reading this. I just finished the first chapter, and OMG, it's even better than I could ever imagine.

May I ask a question, just to be sure? ; The dream Pinkie has about her and Rainbow Dash,

is that a reference to Cupcakes?

I'm so glad I finally have the time to read this. This deserves alot more views.

Oh and, you must feel so proud that this is being made into a game! I can't wait for it!

I have been playing SH ever since I was a little girl, and ponies are my life. This has got to be the best combo ever!

Now if you'll excuse me, I'll go read the next chapter right away!

Hmm... This was... Interesting

I may try to make a flash game out of this if I have free time

#21 · 151w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Wow......That was awesome....along with me hearing ost tracks from Silent hill it gave me a feeling of paranoia which in other words you did just great.

This was pure amazing.

Whenever at the end when Pinkie realized Slendermane was the colt, and that everything was inside her head, I was like "DUDHCYIDBGUVFIDSBGDV'

5/5

O.O.........WHAT THE FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK...........WELL WE R ALL DIED WE R DIED THANK U TWILIGHT U JUST KILLED US ALL.......only one thing to do*walks into closet and comes out looking like i can take on a army of 10,000,000 soilders*lets get crack-en........hahahahaha Kraken

pf-ft blazingshadow i go through the fourth wall all the time..........and thats why i created the doctor to clean up my mess......and i usually accedintaly make 1 sentint life form go insane every time i cross....i should probably stop going through it........either way i love this chapter hahaha she broke the fourth wall

#25 · 149w, 16h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Oh my, so Pinkie's been sent to a dark world!  You'd think it would be Fluttershy that would be sent to a place like that, but you chose the happiest pony to torture.  I must also applaud for using Cupcakes as one of the nightmares.

Thia is amazing, it had me reading straight through!

Good job Pony!

Ah! I wish i could help in the game making. But, Alas. The only thing im good for is talking. Oh it`d be fun to voice a character. But my voice is to deep to be anyone`s... And also id be Shy and shaky reading the scripts  :twilightsheepish:

#28 · 148w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh:pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp:

At first i was like :rainbowkiss: but then i was like :pinkiegasp:

At first i was like :rainbowkiss: but then i was like :pinkiegasp:

#31 · 148w, 14h ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Wow, that was... just wow....:pinkiegasp:

I was never a Silent Hill fan, but this Fanfic was awesome.:pinkiesad2:

Well your story also got me to continue reading since noon and its night right now so, good job man.:rainbowlaugh:

Awesome, best ending so far...

This is what I was looking for since the first ending

Good job tho, hope to see more of your work :pinkiehappy:

I really like these, they give depth to the characters and make them more... real (for lack of a better term)

Anyway good job jake, looking forward to the next chapter in story 3

#35 · 147w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Lol filleydelpia:rainbowlaugh:

#36 · 147w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

I'm thinking Bellimina died and this caused by repressed memory or something

Time for next chapter! :pinkiecrazy:

I am glad I took the time to read this, it was amazing. :pinkiesad2:

#38 · 147w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Manly tears where shed :fluttercry:

:yay: Adventure!

Wait... Top hat and cane dancing Pyramid Head? :pinkiehappy: That is so win!

#41 · 147w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Wait...so is this a "Silent Hill" crossover or a "Slender Man" crossover?

Glad to see my first not-cupcake story here. Still one of my absolute favorites because THIS is how you do a crossover right. I mean the concepts of Silent Hill are there, but it still has an original twist to them. And obviously, major points have been earned for no gratuitous Pyramid Head appearance (Save for the joke ending, but that's what they're for.) All my stars belong to this (and Fallout: Equestria, and On a Cross and Arrow, and Past Sins.)

I don't even like grim-dark, but wow, this is one of the best fictions of all time. You, my good sir, are brilliant, although I'm a little afraid to read Silent Ponyville 2.

It's very rare for a story to actually scare me, but you managed to pull it off. When I first caught eye of this story I was literally bouncing up and down just to read it. I mean- I'm a biiiig silent hill fan. I'm also a big fan of Pinkie Pie, so it was just exciting to see something like this. :yay:

*reads first comment* yea ok... 10th chapter... WAIT! *reads name then scrolls down to bottom of page

*bows down*

Kk now that i got that out of me, it was a great story. I cant wait to read the next one. I saw the second one on the featured list, so i decided to read the first one first. Im glad i did. I liked all the extra endings you put in there :pinkiehappy: i remember how disturbing the movie was, and this had me thinking about it the whole time. Five stars for you. (god im horrible at writing. My sentences just are horrible, and even tho this barely influences my sentence structure, it doesnt help that im typing on my ipod)

Also, i rated 5 stars, but it went from 4.8 to 4.7... Like what? I dont even.... :rainbowhuh:

YAY!

what in the name of... :derpyderp1:

#49 · 146w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

D'aaaww Pinkie feels sympathy for the little monster-zombie-child. That kind of innocence is why ponies would die in a zombie apocalypse.:rainbowhuh:

Silent Hill and Fatal Frame scare me crapless, and I love every second.:pinkiecrazy:

OOOO! Idea Idea!! Fatal Frame ponies Fatal Frame ponies!!!! It must be done!:yay:

#50 · 146w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

red/blood moon *shudder*

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