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BronyDan


Well, Bore da or Prynhawn da everypony, this is BronyDan. It's not original but, 'ey you try coming up with originality these days.

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While helping a friend out of hospital, Pipsqueak, Featherweight and Chowder promise to help him sneak out of the house one night so he could spend a passionate night with his Marefriend.

However this act of good will leads the trio into a series of events that tests how far a friendship is able to go, while seeing how far they will go to avoid causing hurt.

(Note: The characters in this story are all in their teens.)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 9 )

The writing is solid enough, but there doesn't seem to be any kind of plot. Also, the story builds up to quickly to my taste. I rather hear first what each specific character (or the CMC as a whole) has done in the past years and what their purpose in life is, because we don't hear about that... and for ponies, cutie marks are kind of important, you know.

A Last of the Summer WIne parody?!?!

Wow.

Now I've seen everything..........

So....Pipsqueak is Compo, Featherweight is Foggy/Blamire and Chowder is Norman Clegg.
This means that Spades is in for a terminal cuddle with Dinky Hooves.......

3480365 Actually Pipsqueak is meant to be Clegg and Chowder is Compo.

Spades, you tactless prat.......

Ah, well. At least we're finally managing to assign ponies to LOSW characters:
Featherweight = Foggy/Blamire
Chowder = Compo
Pipsqueak = Clegg
Mr and Mrs Cake = Ivy and Sid
Apple Bloom = NORA BATTY?!?!

The ironic thing is that at some point, I expect to see the Mane Six drink tea in unison while commenting on how stallions get in the way of busy mares.

Now look, you can't make Sweetie Belle Marina! I wouldn't wish being cast as Marina on my worst enemy.

4429967 Don't worry, this story is based on a story before Howard, Pearl and Marina were introduced.

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